rate_review Reviews

Hey! I read this the other day off fanfiction.net and was moved by it but I couldn't find the link to comment on afterwards - I copy stories to word so I could blow them up to better read you see :)

There is only one fault with this - the time that it took for the whole scene and the whole admittance is rather short, knowing these two, and all their head issues lol but otherwise smack on with characterisation, angst, history, the whole schmackeroo!

You did really well with the portayal of the battle and I could honestly sense, feel the electricity humming - in the air, the skies, their bodies etc... Well done!

This was really good...not graphic but heartfelt =)

omg that was so beautiful, that's exactly what they are and the exchange between the two was so heartfelt it was amazing, keep up the awesome work :P

I loved that I could feel the emotion of both Sasuke and Naruto. It was great!

That was amazing! I loved the ending!

That was amazing! I loved the ending!

whoa, that was just ... wow! beautiful is a good word, but doesn't quite come close. sorry i can't say more but this was a delicious and moving fic to read.

I liked it alot. I definitely felt the emotion there. Nice job. Wish you luck in your future writing.

It was a good emotional piece, but it just didn't feel right at the end. I was with you right until the last line, cause it just didn't seem like Sasuke to abandon everything else that he had worked for. Or maybe that's not what he was doing. I don't know, it just felt like a weird place to end I guess.

However, I very much liked the route you took to describe the emotions/feelings.

I look forward to seeing more.

You asked, if this made me feel anything, to review. So I am. You made it so real.. I felt as if it could actually happen. As if that could actually happen in the real anime/manga. It almost made me cry..