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for What We Are

by Elli

person kris
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was fan-fucking-tastic, it was soooo believable and HOT and sad and happy and everyTHING!
person despairs
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved Sasuke's answer to Naruto's question. I feel like they are Soulmates as well.

My favorite line in the story...

They nuzzle like affectionate kittens, mouths open, and Sasuke feels his disobedient lips twitch into a smile.

“We’ll have this forever.”

I'm a major sucker for a happy ending.
person Rymika
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Rymika: This... this was so good! *says with tears in her eyes* So much emotion and... and well! It was compleatly beautiful and utterly romantic! *almoust drowning in tears* I... I loved it! *colapses from emotional brake down*
Naruto: Hey, I think she's dead!
Sasuke: Baka, she's just couldn't handle that much emotion.
Naruto: Oh, so it was that good eh?
Sasuke: Hn
Naruto: I take that as a yes, well then teme help me to plounder her pocets while she's still out.
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice! well written, very in character! ur a great writer