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for Poisoned Rationality

by knize16

person Halskr
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. This is a really intersting and new twist to this pairing. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! I'm not usually a fan of femNaru but you write very well and the story plot is intriguing. Thanks for sharing this! :)
person ChaliceOfBlood
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I forgot to log in, but anyway, thought I should review.
This story is wonderful, and original! I think I reviewed it before saying the same thing, but I thought it should be praised anyway. Please update soon, this is a gem. :D
-CoB.
person Raithea
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, but i have a question. You have Suigetsu And Karin there which Sasuke met after he got rid of Orochimaru, so I am a little confused about your timeline. Is Orochimaru dead and they're just keeping up the pretense or is it something else?
person roth14
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting twist on the story. I think I will continue to read it. Oh, and thank you for crediting the book too. I have seen too many authors who think that they are being sly by not saying they got some inspiration from another book. I hate that. Especially when it is obvious. So thank you.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe interesting idea, and well done so far can't wait to read more, i kinda get the feel that i want sasuke to be a hornball in this one lol u know i just see sasuke being attracted to naru's(kisa's) loud personality and molesting her at any chance he gets that would be sooo funny lol, anyways please update soon i really wanna see where u take this
person a kitsunes ligh
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like it! Please update soon! Im really curius to see how naruto's and sasukes relatioship develops now!
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very intriguing and moreish first chapter! I love genderswitch!Naruto. Hm I'm trying to work out whether Sasuke knows it's Naruto or whether his susprise was from the person being executed being a woman, hmmm I'm thinking the latter but with Sasuke the sneaky bastard you never know! Awesome First chapter, can't wait to read more!!!

XXX
person Raholea
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this has potential. would like to see more of how this turns out.
i can't believe you made dear naruto a girl...!
person Damp
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the hell? o.O You've already poisened Naruto on the frist chapie?

-Damp *WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE Slow Dancing In A Burning Room??? (is dying to read the next chapie)*