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for Second Chance

by sakuyalove

person monrque
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is good and i do hope that sasuke is not hurt

i want to see that rat get whats comin to him.
person dkf
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Has Naruto asked Sasuke about the MPREG part of this XD? Mrrr, awesome fic.
person mrk33
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, Hiroshi wishes he was in Sasuke's shoes as the captain or more?
Looking forward to the next chappie.
person Nami
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke fat with babies XD!! Hurray for two chapters cause I missed the other one X3. NaruSasu bit and Naruto holding Sasuke's stomach? Dang, I can't wait for that. But then, there might be more worries after cause he's anbu. Aaaah, what if Hiroshi is put in charge of his protection cause Naruto's an idiot o_o!? Hiroshi might toss him off a cliff at this point ._. ... Good thing Sasuke's smart.

I can't wait for more X3!
person Alice
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mpreg is the best. I wonder how Sasuke is going to take that.
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story line...although the chapter seemed a little short...maybe Yuzuki's battle should be expanded or Chiinu's situation introduced. Still a good chapter though :)
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was hot, love the smex between Sasuke and Naruto.
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah!!! hehehehe Excellent chapter! Naruto is such a troublemaker.


I wonder what Gaara wants and why Sasuke is so worried about his second in command guarding Sakura? I guess I'm going to have to wait for the next chapter, eh? ^^ Keep up the awesome work!
person dkf
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I love that Jiraiya thought of it. And Hinata was awesome. At least I think it's her...
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT!!!!

yeah, so I thought Naru will get preg with Kyuu's help, but it looks like Naru has other plans he he.
I wonder how Sasu will react to the news ^_^.

Great Lemon, great update and thanks for all your hard word.

Love Robyn