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by sakuyalove

person shadowphoenix143
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I for one am not happy. I dislike Hiroshi with a burning passion! Naturally I am going to dislike anyone that tries to break their unconventional family up.
I do wonder how Sasuke will take the news of his impending 'motherhood' ~snicker~ That should be fun. Why does Sakura think Naruto is an enigma? He's not the difficult to understand!
person shadowphoenix143
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sakura, one of the hardest things in the world is a miscarriage, especially that far along into the pregnancy. I feel really bad for Naruto too, I know he feels guilty but it really wasn't his fault, he didn't know she wasn't really pregnant. I'm glad Sasuke understood when Naruto needed him and stopped yelling. Really sad chapter!
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm so... At first I really did think that Naruto let Sakura off so lightly. While I understand that she is already distressed because of the loss of the baby. Her actions at least deserved some sort of admonishment which she didn't receive. But with the whole mpreg thing looming in the air I think its sort of payback. I think Sasuke would be like wtf at first but once he got over his shock he'd be happy.

And I am happy that Hiroshi, while he can be an ass he is not unbearable. And its really amusing to see his and Sasuke's interactions. And, while I don't think Sakura would ever be able to completely understand Naruto, I do think that Hiroshi definitely isn't the one to help her in that understanding. He seems to be infatuated with Naruto, and usually people with 'hearts' in their eyes only see people the way they want to see them, not as they truly are. But hey if she learns anything it would be of Hiroshi's feelings towards Naru.

Anyway love how this story is turning out so far.
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! HOLY SHIT!! HOLY SHIT!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!!!!!!!!!


heheheheh =^^= Goddamn it, YES! Sasuke's getting knocked up!!! Bwhahahahhaahaha fan-freaking-tastic!!! hahahahaha Goddamnit -- YES!


This story just got 15 times better! I can't wait until the next chapter when Sasuke finds out that he's going to have bear the children. God I love you right now. This is so awesome. hehehehe Yay!!! ahhhhh! (insert more glee related remarks here)

I simply don't know whatelse to say. Thank you? Keep up the awesome work! hehehe!
person monrque
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this rat guy is a up to something so why hasnt anyone said anything yet. this very good i just wonder who will be the other woman. dum dum dum LOL!!!!! and sasuke pregers hahahahahaha that is a fight i will love to read.
person Charlie
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to love this story, especially the mpreg part. I really didn't like Sakura as part of their life (shivers). I thought Last Chance was an amazing story until you added Sakura into the equation.
I can't wait till Naruto is finally free from her and it's just Naruto & Sasuke.
person No0ne
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Flipin awesome can't wait till you update!
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter...it has just enough to keep me guessing (what is hiroshi's evil plan?...)and interested. keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehe. I started laughing when i saw that sasuke was going to carry kids.....hehehehehehe. the rat is a butthead. and sakura is a twit. but it was a really good chapter. keep it up, awesome writing!
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good cant wait for more!