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by sakuyalove

person KingCobra582
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. What a great sequel.

Naruto and Sakura, though. Ouch. I pity them.
person hpn827
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This would be a great story if Naruto dumps her.
person Luma
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kinda almost feel sorry for Sakura, but I hate her so then I kinda don't. Blah.
Fuzzy kid with ears and a tail... that's fun.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. WHat a dark opener! Poor little baby... I guess this means that demons and humans don't take well to human child birth. Although if the baby (or more appropriately, kit) was that animalistic, I suppose it was probably for the best that she miscarried. Makes me wonder how long Naruto's gonna hold out before letting the two of them on to his demon status. Cause, I mean he's fully merged now. Does this just mean he's more demon during his mating season? Or will all unions between him and Sakura result in demon influenced kits (just, maybe at a slighter degree)?

Anyway, glad your back and started with the sequel! Keep up the great work! ^^
person puddi
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
did i see MPREG? woaahh:D it reminds me of something....
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh... That's so sad about the baby dying. That's why, if I were Naruto, I would've snapped at that bitch big time for lying about her pregnancy now that he knows she did it.

Still, good to see you continuing this fascinating ficcy! ^_^
person gaara89
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe she lost the baby. Poor Naruto and Sakura. Great start with the sequel by the way. I hope you continue soon.
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaa, your fics are always the best, please update soon !!! Make it a Mpreg ? (a Naruto pregnant with Sasuke's child) I'm usually against threesome but you made it so perfectly that it's ok to have Sakura here cuz Naruto loves Sasuke the most (huhuhu) { ^w^}
person evolgit
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, this started off really sad. Poor Sakura... though it was half her fault. It probably would have been best to lie about something else, sweetie e_e;. I'm sure it would have ended better if you came clean, told him you knew, and then worked from there. But still, baby loss is sad. Naruto should probably confront her about it, but then... I think all of them were in the wrong. Cheating behind each others backs e_e.

And did I hear m-preg? I can't wait to see Sasuke fat XD. And reactions of the village to said fatness. 'Chinu, you're gettin a little... *watermelon gesture* thar.' Though, I'm pretty sure Sasuke would much rather remain indoors all the time while being fat, so no one can see.
person ide
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the rest! (e-mail: idemillions@yahoo.fr)