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October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I do really llove this story. I hope you are still writing on it,, it would.be such a waste of a good story if you dropped it. Please come back.
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
TENSHI!!!!! you best finish this story i love it ad i will be sorely disappointed and depressed if its not finished and i ave to fret and worry over what might happen or not happen
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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story looking forward to more, also love your other story that led to this one.
good luck writing more chapters
good luck writing more chapters
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March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You seem to be doubting your writing skills a lot, but you really shouldn't. I don't think I would have stay up all night to read a piece of junk and it's sequel.
I really love your story. You write the characters so well, and I love how the children are. I didn't think there was too much angst at all, there was just enough to balance the story out and make it more serious. And I like the humour in this. I definitely wouldn't want to be around a pregnant Naruto.
I think you stopped the story at the right place, it would have just been dragging on if you had written too much more. The sequel is like starting a new story. The last one was about them running from Konoha and then returning. (Basically the story centred around the village a lot) and this one seems to be about their journey in starting a new village of their own and the hurdles along the way (mainly Hiashi.)
You can correct me if I've miss-interpreted anything and I'm really sorry if I have, but bottom line I love this story and have enjoyed reading it immensely.
I really love your story. You write the characters so well, and I love how the children are. I didn't think there was too much angst at all, there was just enough to balance the story out and make it more serious. And I like the humour in this. I definitely wouldn't want to be around a pregnant Naruto.
I think you stopped the story at the right place, it would have just been dragging on if you had written too much more. The sequel is like starting a new story. The last one was about them running from Konoha and then returning. (Basically the story centred around the village a lot) and this one seems to be about their journey in starting a new village of their own and the hurdles along the way (mainly Hiashi.)
You can correct me if I've miss-interpreted anything and I'm really sorry if I have, but bottom line I love this story and have enjoyed reading it immensely.
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know you haven't updated in a long time, but I really love this fic and I truely hope that you'll find the insperation to continue again soon!
-ThoughDarknessandLight (ff.net)
-ThoughDarknessandLight (ff.net)
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
btw when you were talking about the new headbands the first thing that popped up in my mind, instead of angels on them, was a wing like on this site I'm on...one of the avatar items is a forehead protector with a wing...btw your b-day is the day before mine ^_^
btw when you were talking about the new headbands the first thing that popped up in my mind, instead of angels on them, was a wing like on this site I'm on...one of the avatar items is a forehead protector with a wing...btw your b-day is the day before mine ^_^
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see what else you have coming up for this story!! this last chapter was great!!!!!
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this series but I have one question, What about the orphans in the village? Since everyone is gone, is Hiashi going to make use of them or are they going to be rescued. Just asking because Naruto has a special place in his heart for them and so does Iruka. But that could also be another story in your arc, ne?? Keep up the great work and I'll keep on reading!!
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Haishi will never learn and what does he think this rogue group will do against elite ninjas and two angels of death? Idiot! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm not disappointed in the slightest! I love the fact that all of Naru and Sasuke's friends and 'family' are in the village of Tenshis. You're doing a great job on this and I hope things get better in real life.
Please, if you need a beta, I can help you out with the spelling errors. I won't admit to being perfect because no one is, but I'd be happy to help with such great stories :)
Ezzy
Please, if you need a beta, I can help you out with the spelling errors. I won't admit to being perfect because no one is, but I'd be happy to help with such great stories :)
Ezzy