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person qwerty
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that things haven't been working out for you. Hopefully, things will get better.
I like the title change. It suits the story better.
I hope nothing bad happens to the people that chose to stay in the village; they are probably just afraid of what might happen to them if they try to leave.
This neo-Akatsuki group... I wonder what is their ultimate goal besides just causing havoc.
Great chapter! Keep going!

person monrque
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I AM SO GLAD TO SEE YOU

thought that well i don't know
thank you for updating
person Avalon
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE darnit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! such a good story! i loved the Crimson Angel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more!!!!!
person nyge98
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was fine. I hope you get well soon and take good care of yourself. I'll be waiting for the next chapter when its ready
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo new chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
person qwerty
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that whatever is going on with you will clear up. Take care of yourself!
Great chapter. Good writing style.
I loved Ino in action!
update!
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update and As much as i like updates take care of yourself.
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Hiashi is such a bastard! No wonder no wants to deal with Konoha anymore. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person nm1716
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love the new village. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON.
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was better than alright it was bombinous. i love that fact that you didn't make sasuke or naruto the kage but kakashi, just picturing him complaining about reading paerwork (they are popular after all) instead of his pervert books has brought a happy tear to my eye. he needs to expand his reading horizons anyway. although i am curious as to the punishment if an angel of death kills someone who he i not ordered to kill i think it will happen sooner or later cause i can't see hiashi getting any wiser or saner (can you). i can't wait to see the next chapter.