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for Poor Dobe

by ladyvaltaya

schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn. now i want to know his plans
person Mort
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful sexy-
Very well written-
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was really really really good. wow. sometimes i really wish aff had a favorites option, i'd fav this in a second
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope this isn't a one shot... cause I loved it.
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!! Please continue!!
person Word_Slave
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, this was good. You know though, you could set this up with another one. I'd really like to see what you have planned next, even though this was a great stand alone. And I think you played the two just right!
Slave
person Jelp
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot, thought a bit confusing at the end. Is there going to be more to this story? There's quite a bit that could be expanded upon. :-) I hope you continue it! ~ Jelp
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! WOW!
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
even though it started out with sex (although that was a really cool and original) i am stoked that there seems to be a plot in there and i can't wait to find out what it is that sasuke is up to. living with a genius pervert must have really paid off (i wonder what happened to naruto) maybe the jiraiya being staight thing does matter. can't wait til the next update.
person Jien
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it I liked it, I can't wait to see what Sasuke's plan was so please update soon!!