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by ElfenDream

person I4eather
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Nice! That was pretty freaking hot! Piercings? niiiice^^ not to mention some surprise name-calling. You got my vote!
person sris
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I'm becoming a nuisance. I almost didn't read this because of you telling it's based on a true story, I'm glad I did though. Another excellent fic! *drooling* I'm adding you to my recommended reading.
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my indeed... that was so freaking hotttt! *tries to stop a nosebleed*
and i loved the ending.. hehehe hope they didn''t kill the old lady :p
person qwerty
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice
person esho
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
epic.
I actually came back to this every day three days straight and read it over when I had a spare minute. This is absolutely, 100%, my favorite story from adultfanfiction.net, and your 'Snake Eat Fox' isn't far behind it. The scene in the car, ohgodddd. It was amazing. Also, great comic relief at the end. "oh... My..." *thud* that was hilarious. You really know how to pull a story together. I'll keep read your fics if you'll keep writing them, for sure. Also, don't give up on 'Red.' I like it D:! The only problem I can fathom being in it is that it's a little slow paced for the first couple chapters. But other than that, it's just as smexy as the rest of your writing.
person Dragon7
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it the lemon scene was so hot.
person Jamie
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YaY my first Beta job ^.^g I gotta say though it's a great story for my first beta I'm gonna throw a party with Vodka and Bacardi and I get a green Audi.
WHEEEEEEE (sorry I just had a lot of coffee and this turned out really good)
~Jamie ^.^g