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for The Bachelor Party

by Hestia

schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is excruiatingly hot. My fave character....no contest, is Kakashi. Hot, and hotter! My second, gotta say I loved Genma, third, Shino, fourth Lee. Genma, you portrayed great, pervy and funny, how else would he be? Another well done job, Hestia. Certainly am looking forward to more. I also have a fic to post, I hope you'll look out for it and review, it'll be up about tomorrow or Monday, as it's currently on fanfiction.net. And too bad Kakashi was demoted to Genin...well, he'll be a very hot, sex-master Genin! HELL YEAH!!!
person Malice In Wonderland
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the best fucking lemon I've ever read IN MY LIFE...you're officially my favorite author...You win 5 internets XD
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, when I came back to consciousness after reading this the first time, I decided that this is one of my favorite of all your stuff. Especially the sweet ending after the orgy, when it turned out to be a plan by Shikamaru so that he could marry Neiji. Very cool.
person nm1716
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, THIS STORY WAS GREAT. I LOVED IT.
person ydjessy
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT like all your stories!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the best oneshot of yours by far! It was so hot and that ending made me tear up! This is my new favorite oneshot and I doubt it'll be replaced.
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*looking at the screen, totally stunned*................OH MY FUCKING GOD!!! That had to be the hottest, most amazing, most awesome, most intense, most...whatever...piece of smuttiness I've EVER had the pleasure of reading!!! I sooooo do hope that you'll write e sequel about Neji's and Shika's wedding night! Please, please, pretty please!!!
person Ivy
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great oneshot! It was too hot for words ;-) Could you write a side fic with Shino/Kiba? You had pretty much every male character and one of my favorite scences was the one with Iruka...who knew he had it in him to be a seme ^_^ I'm glad Neji and Shika got to be together and his speech at the end was really moving. How crafty of him to have that planned all along. It would also be cool if you wrote about the honeymoon, but perhaps that's asking too much...all your fics are fantastic!
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
once again i should have known hestia - the best
person llyoung
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love that Shika had everything planned from the beginning. Wonderful bachelor party and I'm sure that Neji and Shika will have an absolutely wonderful honeymoon.