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for The Bachelor Party

by Hestia

person Raholea
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.....
*faints*


that ended perfectly... damn, but that was hot, wild, steamy..
you know this already. my words couldn't do it justice...
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*is puddle of goo*

DEAR GOD GODDESS! You ARE trying to kill me!!!!

*flails*
Fuck. That was so insanely, absurdly HOT that words defy me!! OMG! OMFG!! It had everything!!! Absolutely everything and anything! The DPs and the rimming and the fisting and oh gods Kakashi!! WOW! He is one dangerously sexy jounin! *drool*
Aiiiee! And Shino! And Kiba!! And oh, heavens, Sai!!
And ngghhh! Possesive Sasuke rocks my world and apparently Naruto's too XD

There was like a nuclear explosion,a level five hurricane and an 8.0 earthquake of HOTNESS all rolled into one!!!

And the lovemaking...I melted. I absolutely and completely melted at end with Shika's requet for Neji's hand and his proposal, Goddess. Shika is such pure, brilliant, unadultered, genius win! I'm soo so happy they get each other, cause they so obviously adore each other to pieces. I mean, a white, milky stone to match Neji's eyes? *dreamy sigh*

PERFECT!! LOVE IT!!! I can't give you enough stars for this. Stars to nth degree for you!!! And then some!

Muah!
person Nanaka
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was really go~od. Definately adding this to my favorites!
person R
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! So hot! Great story. :D
person charmpit
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No fair! Shino should have been packing the most equipment. Why did it have to be Sai?

And why wasn't Jiraiya invited to the bachelor party?
person qwerty
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was INSANE!!!!!!! Good lord, I don't think I've read that much sex in one one-shot, or any other fanfic EVER!
Jesus Christ....
Great job. Loved the twist ending.
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh mercy...there is no way that could have been any hotter. You are like THE yaoi goddess. This fangirl is thoroughly worked up. I think i need a cold bath. Wonderful story! I need to go change my undies ^_^
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
two words: hot damn! wow-zas! i somehow knew neji might marry shika, but the bachelor party was the best one i've ever heard of (you rock^_^V)