rate_review Reviews

i love the plot and can't wait to read the rest!!!

No other author makes Naruto/Sasuke this interesting. Wonderful story.

i know that its been a while since you wrote this story...ive just reread it and i started to think...i think that you should rewrite this story except write it from sasukes side..u know? i read the story and i kept thinkin i wonder what sasukes thinkin bout...so..its just a suggestion..but it would be cool..this story was awesome..and one of my favs...think about it?

I resisted reading this story when I read the summary. Something about the summary made me not want to read it. Then I started reading Life Before, Life After - I enjoyed each update that much I went to your author's page to see what other stories you'd written, and finally gave this one a chance.

I'm glad I did. You built the tension beautifully, and I really like how you laid out the plot and character development. I'm just sorry I didn't read it sooner.

Watching Naruto and Sakura filled my heart, and broke it too.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! its finnished? SOBS!
it so good, i just read it all as i found it a few whours ago. it was so compelling and so many twists and turns.
I LOVED Chapter 4 with haku i wish he was in it more, i love au stories where haku is alive and buds with naru,
please if the bunnie strikes you write a one shot smexy piece or add it to this as we havent got our dr sasuke in the white coat and naru turning to mush, i'm such a pervert :D lol but i think it would be fun.
thank you for the wonderfl stroy,

Your English is quite good considering it's your second language. I did, however, notice spelling and grammatical errors, so you might want to track those down and correct them before you post the final version on fanfiction.net. Also, like Kimra said in an earlier review, you're missing some small words in some places -- "the" and "on", for example. Those are the only corrections I can think of that would improve this fic. :D Everything else is quite good. You drew me in and hooked me right away!

I enjoyed this story a lot -- plot-wise, it was really well done. I loved the pairing (I don't understand why NaruSasu is so rare), loved the characterization, loved the description and setting. Very good work! I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.

Oh, that ending was just right! I'm still kind of sad about it because the whole story was so good and I did want to hear more about Naruto's past that you wrote earlier in the story, but it was good, very good. As I mentioned earlier, if you want help editing, I'm all in. Hope to see more stories from you!

Nothing bugging me. I'm enjoying this story immensely. Can't wait to read the rest! :D

I started reading this awesome story yesterday, I a glad you added a new chapter. I really like this story and I can't wait to see how it ends.