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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it was really unexpected! Why did she do it I wonder? What for? Silly girl...
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know how I feel about this story. I can't believe you're ending it after only one more chapter! I was hoping Naruto, at least, would have some semblance of a happy ending. Sasuke, too, for all he seems like an ass didn't desevr all that! I can't wait to read the last of it!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. You said somewhere English wasn't your first language. But aside from a few missing words here and there (i.e. the, on, and) this story is brilliant. No scratch that it's brilliant anyway, but the only thing that indicates that English isn't your first language are those few missing words... and even they can be set aside as typos.
Anyway. The story - I love it. I hope things work out well for everyone (except neji). Cheers! Kimra
Anyway. The story - I love it. I hope things work out well for everyone (except neji). Cheers! Kimra
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*inner Sakura victory pose of 'He** yeah!'*
I have no objection what-so-ever to seme/uke choices. To me it fits. So when Sasuke was lying there doing Nothing At All beyond getting it up the arse and eyeball sexing, I laughed and said 'that's very Sasuke'. I do so love a sneering bottom (who unconsciously does nice things) and a laughing seme (who is sometimes a bit of an uncertain moron, but still cute and loud and honest).
And I do very much love your story. I love it to BITS. And Hinata, you awesome girl(though I'm worried now about the phone thing e_e)! *hugs her* And Neji, you uptight b-tard! *hugs him* And everyone in general! *hugs them all* ...and I kind of want to see more Chouji and all the other kids. You made him so cute.
Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
I have no objection what-so-ever to seme/uke choices. To me it fits. So when Sasuke was lying there doing Nothing At All beyond getting it up the arse and eyeball sexing, I laughed and said 'that's very Sasuke'. I do so love a sneering bottom (who unconsciously does nice things) and a laughing seme (who is sometimes a bit of an uncertain moron, but still cute and loud and honest).
And I do very much love your story. I love it to BITS. And Hinata, you awesome girl(though I'm worried now about the phone thing e_e)! *hugs her* And Neji, you uptight b-tard! *hugs him* And everyone in general! *hugs them all* ...and I kind of want to see more Chouji and all the other kids. You made him so cute.
Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a funny story! I love how we can hear every little thing Naruto is thinking. You've really got an awesome sense of humor and I love the plot twist. Who'd have ever thought Neji was like that and Sakura and everyone else got Sasuke's story WRONG!!! Oh well. Sorry I haven't been Reviewing but I've been transferring your story to read on my computer having to share my daughter's computer which has internet access, mine doesn't.
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Naruto seminess!
There is waaay too little of that
and way too much Sasuke-seme smex
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which I really dont understand cause Sasuke doesnt feel like the guy who would do ANYTHING productive at all in a relationship - start it, take it to the next level, be the initiative guy and actually control it at all
:d
really, its not his style
so seeing him being the seme disturbs me a lot v.v
hurray for non seme Sasukes! Besides, its in his name too! :D SasUke :d As if that wasnt obvious enough!
There is waaay too little of that
and way too much Sasuke-seme smex
._.
which I really dont understand cause Sasuke doesnt feel like the guy who would do ANYTHING productive at all in a relationship - start it, take it to the next level, be the initiative guy and actually control it at all
:d
really, its not his style
so seeing him being the seme disturbs me a lot v.v
hurray for non seme Sasukes! Besides, its in his name too! :D SasUke :d As if that wasnt obvious enough!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I completely COMPLETELY agree with your choice of seme/uke. NaruSasu for life!
Plus, I can't say the story wasn't leading up to that. Naruto, in whatever sexual situation he was in with Sasuke, was always taking the lead. Anyways, definitely a dramatic and hott chapter. The sex scene was done perfectly. I like that there were arguments and fights in the chapter, it kept the characters in character and made Sasuke and Naruto's realationship more believable.
I positively love your writing style. All the descriptions are so vivid. The story is original and refreshing. Please please update soon :)
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mah! i don't know what's wrong with people! sasUKE is amazing! naruto rulz as seme! I love your story! OMG! is something going to happen to Hinata?! NOO! she's so sweet!! Neji is an asshole! please update as soon as you can!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. I'm not sure if i will be able to catch the next chapters but i will do my best. Keep writing it, you keep the characters in their respective character quite well and you have creative ideas. Great work, keep it up! =D
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to copy+paste from my rec site because I'm lazy like that XD;;
I think I clicked the link on a whim, not paying much attention to the implied pairing because the summary looked kind of interesting. I do like SasuNaru, but I don't read much fic for it anymore, if any. I spent hours reading most of this, went to bed, got up and finished the rest. I couldn't have put it down if I tried, and the only reason I did once was because I was falling asleep at my keyboard in the wee hours of the morning. And by wee hours, I mean 6 A.M. This fic is one of those phenomenons were it seems absolutely in character and with perfect characterization, but when you think about the situation outside of the fic, you get confused that this fic is not the canon. Even when I thought Sakura and Ino should have been more worried after the accident in the first chapter, it was impossible to let it jar me. I love Sasuke's characterization. I love pretty much everyone's, actually, but his is well done for someone with his personality. I love Naruto and Sasuke's past history, and how Sasuke reacted to Naruto when he woke up. I fell hard for this story and didn't climb out of the hole until I realized I needed sleep, or soon I wouldn't even be able to comprehend the words I was reading. If my enthusiasm doesn't rouse you into trying it out, then I can only feel sorry for the person missing out on it.
I think I clicked the link on a whim, not paying much attention to the implied pairing because the summary looked kind of interesting. I do like SasuNaru, but I don't read much fic for it anymore, if any. I spent hours reading most of this, went to bed, got up and finished the rest. I couldn't have put it down if I tried, and the only reason I did once was because I was falling asleep at my keyboard in the wee hours of the morning. And by wee hours, I mean 6 A.M. This fic is one of those phenomenons were it seems absolutely in character and with perfect characterization, but when you think about the situation outside of the fic, you get confused that this fic is not the canon. Even when I thought Sakura and Ino should have been more worried after the accident in the first chapter, it was impossible to let it jar me. I love Sasuke's characterization. I love pretty much everyone's, actually, but his is well done for someone with his personality. I love Naruto and Sasuke's past history, and how Sasuke reacted to Naruto when he woke up. I fell hard for this story and didn't climb out of the hole until I realized I needed sleep, or soon I wouldn't even be able to comprehend the words I was reading. If my enthusiasm doesn't rouse you into trying it out, then I can only feel sorry for the person missing out on it.