rate_review Reviews

So, I'm hooked on this story and have been from the beginning, especially since you keep me coming back to check it because of the awful cliffhangers in the last few chapters. AWFUL! How could you end it there? Although, I would like to ask whether or not English is your first laguage beause the tenses, grammar and sentence structure in some places is WAY off. I can correct it in my head as I go; although it's irksome to do, the story is worth it. But, if you'd like help with it, I've been told I'm quite the editor. Definitely one of the few fanfictions out of thousands I've read that is worth reading, again . . .and again. . .and again. . . . I can even put up with Iruka, the mother hen, as I often find him that way in stories just because Naruto and Sasuke and Gaara are so well portrayed. I'm wating. . .cough, cough. . . more, plaese.

grrrrr u know i had one thought at the end of the last chapter: 'nooo!! you bitch!' lol i'm sorry for calling u the b word dwl but seriously, naruto drops to his knees to work for his dinner and u end it there?! eeeeeeevil!

Neji is indeed a big poopyhead bastard. And now that he's been a jerk and gone Naruto & Sasuke can sex it up?!

The name of this chapter should have been "When Neji was revealed to be a big poopyhead bastard". Yeah, a little long I suppose, but true!
Another amazing update, of course. I love Naruto's internal takes on the situation. He is so funny. And when he refuses Sasuke offer for a drink.
So much came out this chapter. Little Hinata is adorable! What a good friend. And Sasuke handled Neji perfectly.
Beautiful, as always. Until the next.

ok. this is my very first review at aff, an I'm reading this more than a year - that cliffhanger just about killed me!!!!! you're evil. I mean that. Howgh.

I love it. I totally don't believe the two would cave all the way just yet, but you gave us a nice taste of what might happen :)

So...is Naruto going to ungoof himself long enough to get it on with Sasuke finally? This teasing is driving me insane!

So, an Uchiha/Hyuuga bitchfest. Saw it coming, but didn't, you know? Nice job on this chapter.

Characters who need to get laid:

Neji (most of all, I should say)
Sasuke
Naruto
Iruka (he's had to endure Naruto's nonsense for how long?)


Please hook one or all four of them up with someone before this fic is over.

It just keeps getting more and more brilliant, doesn't it.
Hmmm... Naruto will want to hear this conversation? I wonder...
I guess I have to wait though...

Oh... That is mean. Really mean. Seriously. I WANT TO HEAR THE CONVERSATION TOO!!!
And I want to know who it was. Tch. Seriously!!!!
Anyway... Poor Hinata. She seems to know what she is doing though... So, go HINATA!!!
Well, I can't wait for the next update! So let it be soon!!!
XD LANE

Another exciting chapter. So full of drama and smexiness, I loved it!

I especially like the intimate conversation Sasuke and Naruto had. It seems that they trust eachother more.

Please please update soon :)