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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha i loved when naruto told sas he would be uncomfortable in the kitchen lol sasu baby didnt like that! naruto knows just how to push his buttons and in the end it got him what he wanted! Bed time! whoo!
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your type of writing.
Makes me want to read more.
But the cliffhanger at the end made me want to cry, because I wanted to see how it ended ;_;
Makes me want to read more.
But the cliffhanger at the end made me want to cry, because I wanted to see how it ended ;_;
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Best chapter ever... Can't wait for more. And to end it there... cruel and unusual, I tell you.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Did you hear the moaning from my house went I got to the end:) It was getting so good and B A M! cliffy:( I was thinking Sasuke had pictures of Naruto in his room he didn't want him to see or he didn't want Naruto to know he doesn't sleep with his wife huh?? But it was a cliffy and a damm good one too:) Can't wait to see what you have in store next time ^_^
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, damn! I need a visual!
Quick, someone draw fanart of a shirtless Naruto standing at the foot of Sasuke's bed facing Sasuke with a come-hither expression on that beautiful face! OMFG that scene rocks!
Quick, someone draw fanart of a shirtless Naruto standing at the foot of Sasuke's bed facing Sasuke with a come-hither expression on that beautiful face! OMFG that scene rocks!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Gaara is smart enough. And poor Naruto and Sasuke. Mostly poor Naruto. He is definitely going to have a heart attack one day.
Sad thing Sasuke is the only doctor in... the mountains.
Well, can't wait for the next chapter. You left us expecting some... Interesting happenings...
Well, update soon!!!
XD LANE
Sad thing Sasuke is the only doctor in... the mountains.
Well, can't wait for the next chapter. You left us expecting some... Interesting happenings...
Well, update soon!!!
XD LANE
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update. I loved Naruto's thoughts while he was trying to get out of breakfast. So funny.
And damn, everytime you get Naruto and Sasuke is a room alone I swear, I stopped breathing. Its a good thing you had Sasuke tell Naruto to breathe because I was like... 'huh, that's a good idea!'
Until the next.
And damn, everytime you get Naruto and Sasuke is a room alone I swear, I stopped breathing. Its a good thing you had Sasuke tell Naruto to breathe because I was like... 'huh, that's a good idea!'
Until the next.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yea!! the cat's away, let the mice play! looking forward to that :D
on a different note, i felt bad for gaara.. i know it had to happen for the sake of the sasunaru buutt :( he's been really cool and it sucked to 'hear' him realise he was only wasting his time *hugs gaara*
on a different note, i felt bad for gaara.. i know it had to happen for the sake of the sasunaru buutt :( he's been really cool and it sucked to 'hear' him realise he was only wasting his time *hugs gaara*
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Naruto is a little sun... Well, that was slightly unexpected. About the girls I meaN
And that line about wearing orange was hilarious!!!
Great job. And for not putting another chapter up for a long time, that's just mean.
Poor poor Suke. And Naruto. Will he be able to resist?
Suspense suspense suspense. Is the circus 'date' for soon? It sounds like it's going to be awquard as hell.
And poor Naruto, everyone wants him, but apparently, the only people he can stand touching his is Sakura, Ino, Iruka and Suke-chan.
Well, please update earlier than you said you would. It would be... Nice.
XD LANE
And that line about wearing orange was hilarious!!!
Great job. And for not putting another chapter up for a long time, that's just mean.
Poor poor Suke. And Naruto. Will he be able to resist?
Suspense suspense suspense. Is the circus 'date' for soon? It sounds like it's going to be awquard as hell.
And poor Naruto, everyone wants him, but apparently, the only people he can stand touching his is Sakura, Ino, Iruka and Suke-chan.
Well, please update earlier than you said you would. It would be... Nice.
XD LANE
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it was so emotionally true! *_*
And I can't wait to see how Naruto will act in the morning after these words ^_^
And I can't wait to see how Naruto will act in the morning after these words ^_^