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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update, passionate and funny. Except for a few spelling errors, there didn't seem to be any problems, so I'm happy you decided to update even though it wasn't beta'd.
Looking forward to more updates!
Looking forward to more updates!
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO! That is meaaaaan. Harsh cliffhanger, I have to say.
Other than that, the story is good. Bar that. It's great. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And the cliffhanger... That just hurst, ya know?
XD Please update and relieve us of that pain soon, ok? It would be very mercifull of you...
And Sasuke and Hinata? Never expected that. :D I love it when I find a fun new pairing.
XD LANE
Other than that, the story is good. Bar that. It's great. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And the cliffhanger... That just hurst, ya know?
XD Please update and relieve us of that pain soon, ok? It would be very mercifull of you...
And Sasuke and Hinata? Never expected that. :D I love it when I find a fun new pairing.
XD LANE
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this is so good! What was Sasuke's reaction? And how will Naruto's date go? I really hope that there are some sparks between those two, even though Naruto will eventually get with Sasuke. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm on;ly at chapter two but i just HAD to tell you i'm so kicking myself! i always saw this story and for some reason never read it but its AWESOME so far i absolutely love it! *squeals* off to read some more
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ur evil!!! jk but cliff hangers
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! I love this story! so cute! I cant wait to see how this one turns out...
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg I want a blow job xDDDD Alas I have no penis, but I will be happy when you give us an update telling us how mr. uchiha reacted to Gaara's... rather funny kiss xDDDDD That was perfect, Naruto's like... clinical description of what was going on omg sofunny xDD
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah man... don't end it there! I wanna see his reaction. Now. Today. Please.
Sigh. So much tension, so little time.
Until the next...
Sigh. So much tension, so little time.
Until the next...
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and original story. I am wondering though, will Kakashi-sensei and his dogs make an appearance??? :D Everyone needs a vacation sometime....heheh! LOL :D Love this story, please keep writing!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My God, you know when you can actually feel embarrassed for a character? Well this definitely happened. That kiss was so awkward but surprisingly so damn cute!! I can't wait to read Sasuke's reaction. A jealous Sasuke is a smexy Sasuke! PLEASE update soon!