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There are parts of the story I find really funny such as when it came to humorous violence you would just give enough information to give the reader an idea, but allow us to use our imagination to fill in the blanks. Then there were the parts I found rather disturbing. The mature scenes to be precise and I'm not just referring to the one in chapter 8. In that regard I wasn't all that surprised by this latest turn in events.

We love you KK!

I reallly like this fic. no1 does Haku as male let alone seme.
I was wondering did u get some of ur ideas from April 4th?

aka shuu... ah my god jeeeezus! :squeal!: I am jumping high on endorphine that is kurai's smut right now, i can't wait for it to get hardcore! and anyway, can't it be like... get sasuke out the picture? I kinda don't like him right now cuz of all the things kishi's doing in the manga. But I also want it to be a 3some... ohmigod I can't decide. because u make 3some uber hot... and to be honest my plots in when I say is in pieces right now, I can't put them into a coherent chapter I'm doooooomed!

I finally got around to reading the new chapter, and all I can say is...nice comeback! This chapter had everything, great comedy (especially the bet), a great lemon (as always), tooth decaying sweetness, and a little angst. BTW, I had almost forgotten about your little Menma obsession until you managed to sneak him in there. lol

WOW.. i;m slow.. didnt put my name in thw reviw

lol I love it! I love u! I love you humor! EPIC.


Ok curiosity number one: Why is Kisame, many times, turned into a black man in AU fics

Okay I think i can answer that. I think reason why people make him black becuase his skin is blue and making him white just.. dosnt seem right. Thats just how i see it. I mean i can see him as black guy. As for the killerbee... KILLERBEE FUCKING ROCKS. AND HOLT SHIT BLACK NINJAS

Yay updates!

It is good to see you again, Kurai. ^_^

Gasp!!!! I can't believe you're back! I haven't read the new chapter yet, but I will as soon as I get the chance to. *nods and cries with happyness*

-Giggles madly- I don’t know if i am just a freak or something but I Soooooo can’t find Sasuke attractive. I was watching a vid of his and Naruto’s fight..er.. well one of many HAHAHA anyway and the frame froze when he was spinning t face Sakura as he had just fried poor Naru-chan and Sai Ahaha he looked soo funny I was like.. WHAHAHAH SASUKE IS A PANFACE!!! It really looked like someone had caught him off guard and sconed him face in the snoz! HAHAHAHA

AHahha then there is the other fight when they are younger and on the water, the frame ‘decided’ to freeze just as Naruto punches him in the face WHAHAHHAHA he then looked like a puffer fish.
-Giggles-
Wait my bad, a puffer fish with eyebrows HAHAHAH you have NOOO idea how funny he looked.
However I LOVE Your story and I ADORE Haku, I.. being a Haku fangirl for his short pressance, CRIED when he died.. so sad, and there are nooooo good Haku/Naru stories, well apart from this one.