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for I Choose You!

by KoibitoFemme

person vashta
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, humorous and edgy. I love Haku in any capacity and a good Haku/Naru is a rare and elusive creature.
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snaps fingers* You almost got it. lol Maybe you SHOULD stick with "shikachou". XD Anyway...welcome back! I loved the update, and as always, can't wait for the next chapter. The lemon was extra yummy, as usual, and Kiko's Corner made me laugh...especally the first one. “Massagey?” ^_^
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I can't wait! And it's ok when you don't put lemons in your chapter...sure they're a nice bonus, but the story itself is funny without them. XD
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:nods nods, cross arms: very APril 4th-ish indeed even the dialogues are sometimes the same. but it's good you made it HakuNaru SasuNaru since whjile I was reading the manga by Itsuki-sensei after finshing it I was already imagining Sasuke and Naruto in their place. Good job! that's my dream come true!!!
person mls
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, not bad. I hope Haku can keep Sasgays greedy hands of his Naru-chan.

Can't wait for the next update. ^_^
person charmpit
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only in a fanfic would Sasuke's charm be utterly and thoroughly eclipsed by Haku's. It's poetic justice, I'm telling you.

Please continue.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:3 I like the story so far. heehee, a quiet Naruto...that's a good one :B
person mls
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story !!!! can't wait to read more of it!!!!! keep up the great job!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep, you can definantly have 2 semes and 1 uke...I'm looking forward to that. XD Really nice job with the lemon in this chapter. Poor Naru-chan, though, having such a hyper active seme...must be tough. lol