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for Children of Snakes and Foxes

by DFoarile

schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story can't wait for the next chapter.
person nm1716
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Needs more spice. I like all the girls, but just plain sex gets a little booring. Throw in some lesbian lemons, some role-play, or some other sex practices to spice it up.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the new about haku makes me happy and great chapter. A great Storyline with good smut in it are becoming harder to find
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was hoping naruto would get konan if you added her. but i hope you could have someone revive Fem Haku and have her join the family. and can you list all the women you plan to have with naruto???
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damnit, you cut off right before the good parts, anything lemony for Konan and the threesome in the hotsprings!!!! Don't just prime us up for a lemon and leave us hanging!!!!
person Cyraxr
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like the story please keep it going. For your information when people with the Mangekyo Sharingan take the eyes of someone else that has at least the Sharingan the damage that the Mangekyo Sharingan caused is fully repaired and from then on prevented and the power of that person's Sharingan and that of the Mangekyo Sharingan if they also had it is added the to the one who took the eyes and can cause new things to be gain, this how Mandra Uchiha is still alive even though he should of died about a hundred years ago. He is the real leader of the Akatsuki and goes by the name Tobe. Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kuernai, and Temari.
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... not to be to rude, but just plain old sex is getting kind of dull. Spice it up with some experimentation, if you give each girl a particular kink it would be more interesting.
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, I can't wait to see Tenten join the fun. But I'd like to see the girls having some private girl time when they can't be with Naruto.