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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU NOT FINISH!!! I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD LOL poor naruto and whats garra got to do with this !!!??? so many questions never to be answered!!!
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I love it! That last chapter was a little short and choppy, as you said, but there's still no doubt you're a fantastic writer. Please update soon. Or... whenever, because I know I always hate it when people tell me to update. Maybe I'm just lazy. I wonder, is Itachi making an appearance at all? He's one of my favourites (I spell it like that because I'm an Aussie. Yay for confusion!).
~hugs
~hugs
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Naruto, as in the words of Michael Scott to Kelly, "You can't solve all your problems by saying you were raped."
Wow, I don't know how you're gonna swing this and make it into a "love/romance", but I will be thoroughly impressed if you do! This is a very unique idea, and your writing style is superb! Publishable-worthy!(Is this enough praise to boost your already super-inflated ego?)
Wow, I don't know how you're gonna swing this and make it into a "love/romance", but I will be thoroughly impressed if you do! This is a very unique idea, and your writing style is superb! Publishable-worthy!(Is this enough praise to boost your already super-inflated ego?)
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please tell me you didn't forget about this story!
I like it and love to read more, so please update soon
MerQueen
I like it and love to read more, so please update soon
MerQueen
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It always makes me laugh when I get done reading a chapter that I happened to like, and the author goes on about how crappy it is. I personally liked it. It was a bit choppy, but Sasuke was chasing naruto, hes getting over being drugged stupid, and has to deal with Kakashi early in the morning-I think choppy works for this. Keep up the goodwork and don't get down on yourself.
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding!? This chapter was awsome! Your way too hard on yourself. and you don't give yourself enough credit. It looks to me like you really did put thought and effort into this chapter. Im amazed by your detailed imagery. It just sucks me into this world and paints such an enticing story. No one can talk to me when I read your chapters, I'm in another world. I definately look forword to your future chapters. :)
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting, I can't wait to read more!!!
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a good chapter...^^... Now Naruto and Sasuke are together.. hmm.. wonder what will happen next??.. maybe Sasuke taking out the amount of money he is missing in Naruto's ass??... XD...Naruto wouldn't be walking for a looooong time... lol
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It didn't suck! Yes, there wasn't an amazing amount of plot development, but there was character interaction and I adore Sasuke and Naruto interaction. Kakashi's cameo was priceless as well.
And Gaara... what's that about??
And Gaara... what's that about??
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Elli and Ella:
1. Updates are always good.
2. I enjoy reading a fic where Sasuke is fighting a damn-near irresistible attraction to Naruto. It is a unique pleasure to watch Sasuke squirm.
3. "Hey, I thought I told you no freebies"...ROFLMAO Sasuke just had to cop that feel didn't he?
Next chapter please!
1. Updates are always good.
2. I enjoy reading a fic where Sasuke is fighting a damn-near irresistible attraction to Naruto. It is a unique pleasure to watch Sasuke squirm.
3. "Hey, I thought I told you no freebies"...ROFLMAO Sasuke just had to cop that feel didn't he?
Next chapter please!