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for Some Kind of Wonderful

by Elli

schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far; there's a fair few drug/whore stories out there, but this one is rather engaging. I like how you didn't do a full out sex scene right off the bat; that kind of ruins it, I think. What you did is nice, a bit of a tease/preview. Look forward to seeing what you do with this; hope there's some more drugged out Sasuke angst.
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I'm dying to read more.
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you have their personalities so far, and I hope you don't change them. I loved the end of this chapter. Leave it to Naruto to accuse his savior of raping him.
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please please tell me you'll be updating again soon
person lindsey
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! This is great!
Can't wait for the next chapter! ^__^
person Kim
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far this story is fucken awesome. I can't wait to read more. :D
person charmpit
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL Naruto is full of shit.

I am loving the way you write utter despair. On Sasuke it's actually charming.

Next chapter please!
person rei
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome! I loved it. Can't wait for the next update. I thought characterizations were good - Naruto's kind of OCC but it fits the story.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... priceless. Sasuke just can't catch a break. Great update.
person Anissa34
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought of writing something like this, but you beat me to it... And you did a fantastic job so far! keep it up!