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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. It is refreshing to read each character in a different light.
I am looking forward to the next installment.:)
I am looking forward to the next installment.:)
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow....
this is the first time i read this story, and initially was kinda put off by the fact a lot of little details seemed changed but then i realized that yes, there really was a reason and it does make sense.
i do like the appearance of several of the jinchurikis ( i know i prolly spelled that wrong) and that you were willing to play with them more than most stories i've read. normally writers only focus on naruto and gaara, but i like the fact you kinda have a broad glance into their world and the little details here and there into each character. i also love the way you put everyone back in their place. too good!
would love to read more. :D
this is the first time i read this story, and initially was kinda put off by the fact a lot of little details seemed changed but then i realized that yes, there really was a reason and it does make sense.
i do like the appearance of several of the jinchurikis ( i know i prolly spelled that wrong) and that you were willing to play with them more than most stories i've read. normally writers only focus on naruto and gaara, but i like the fact you kinda have a broad glance into their world and the little details here and there into each character. i also love the way you put everyone back in their place. too good!
would love to read more. :D
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
question ... when you get this fic published, can you let me know so i can buy a copy? OMG!!!!! this was soooo perfect. thank you thank you thank you! one of the ultimate gaanaru stories of the century. sorry, didn't mean to gush .. yeah, i did. it was really wordy, but not overly so. the descriptions were very well done, and the part where arashi is giving sasusaku a verbal beating. YES!!!!!
absolutely awesome .. can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for this!
absolutely awesome .. can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for this!