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for Shades Of Grey

by KotoneHime

person Anon
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
um i wanted to point out that tsukite actually means (sumo) a situation in which a rikishi accidentally touches the dohyo with his hand, his opponent thus winning
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! That was such a fitting ending!!! I LOVED IT! X3 I LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!
person Sabrina
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story was wonderful. i've been following this story for weeks. Amazing writter. Keep going!
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far!
person a kitsunes light
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute ending!!!!!!!!
I would do a larger review but Ive got not the time! SORRY!
BUT I REEEEAAAAAALLYYYYYYYYYY LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!
WRITE MORE SOON!
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww cheese-tastic ending. All-in-all a nice story ne... enjoyable.
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww this was so cute, the end part had me grinning at the end. And I so wanted to bash in Kiba's head when he said those hurtful words.

Gah I can't believe he used sexy no jutsu on Itachi, I half expected Sasuke to smack his blonde dobe on the back of his head for that.

Poor Gaara is now being stalked by the pinkette and blonde sidekick. Poor him...

Overall good, this should have definetly gotten more reviews then it has so far =/ But maybe they are like me and haven't stumbled onto this story yet.

Here's hoping.
person gaara89
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! It's Itachi!
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Totally wasn't expecting that from Kiba!
Not that I'm complaining or anything. The unexpected keeps things interesting.
It was just... like, "WHOA!" when I read it.
Poor Hinata though. D: Omg ITACHI'S ENTRANCE! ._.
I'm waiting on the edge of my seat, keep up the good work! :D
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww... and everybody lived happily ever after. ^^ The end.


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