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by Hestia

schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow! Another very hot and lovely story. I'm so surprised 'cos I never really thought that Shikamaru and Gaara would make a good couple. It made perfectly sense though the way you wrote it. I smiled a lot when Shika said that he is going to keep Gaara 'cos he's not an idiot. Well who can blame him? I would keep Gaara forever, too! ^__^
person sauncha
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was SMOKING hot! Thanks so much for the smut. :)
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was HOT!!!! MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
person Grey
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, you just basically managed to hit pretty much every kink I have and few that are news to me, man. Gorgeous, and I'll probably be hoping for at least one more chapter of this until the day I die... but just the one chapter is pretty much a gift as it is. *grins*
person llyoung
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the b-day present. You are very sweet to write my fav pair for me.

Loved everything about the story. Gaara is just so sweet and Shika, especially in his thoughts, was just so funny.
Loved the sex, loved the tattoo's and the piercings. Love the idea of the skirt and tigh highs.

Thanks again.
person KyrieII
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mhmmm...Gaara + tattoos + piercings = smexy ;)
But what about that skirt and stockings? xD
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nggghhhh!!!!

*brain melted, goo on bed, cannot think*

Gods, Goddess, you're gonna be the death of me! Death by hotness!

Your Gaara is always so much incredible love. No exception here. He's beautiful, absolutely beautiful. And I've loved him with Shika since I first read D/s and WOW!!! This was like, gah, the flip side of their D/s relationship! You've seriously got me all hot and bohtered and shivery! *shivers*
LOVE!!!
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's like D/s AU in reverse! Wonderful!!!!!!!!! ^_^
person pen_name
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... Oh WOW! That was... that was orgasmic! God, please write a second chapter or a sequel *is begging on hands and knees* Please, please, pleeeeeeeease...

On a different note (I've been trying to find a way to say this elsewhere, like maybe by email, but I couldn't find it), I simply adore your writings although sometimes some of them are too much for me, like that ShikaNeji fic (I'm such a wuss, I know T_T). I followed D/s Naruto almost too loyally, I wanted to review but after seeing the hundreds of reviews I felt that nothing I say could possibly be anything new to you and... *blushes* I kinda felt bad because I only read the GaaraShika chapters *is ashame*. I would also like to thank you for your reviewing and recommending my fics. God, I was... struck dumb that day and didn't know how to react. I'm a big fan of yours so... yeah, I could be such a dork sometimes XD. You're one hell of a writer (I mean it!). Thank you so much for everything.
person sexybeam
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
shit i'll assist both of them! hot damn another lovely fic darlin' i died when shika called garra a bad boy now i cant stop grinning. i'm off to see if i can find any red heads in my supply closet.