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by WhisperElmwood

schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit, when I started to read I was a bit worried. I figured I was about to read one of those sappy plot-less smut drivels that sound about as in character as a doorknob.

Now that i've actually read it, I must say I'm impressed. Great writing, not too outrageous premise, and featuring one of the lesser used pairings. (I pretty sure I've seen it before but it was utter garbage.)

Two thumbs up! (thats not all...) <~*EWW!!! PERVERSION~*
person MeLaiya
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
honestly never would have in a million years considered this pairing but I absolutely loved how you portrayed this, a few grammatical mistakes here and there but nothing overly serious. Anyhoo, I think I have a new favorite pairing. Loved it, keep up the good work and update soon.
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was different. Great story, a nice surprise.
person Quirk otheTrade
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...I think I like it. Interesting couple idea, good plotting and grammer... I think somewhere in there was a 'know' meant as 'now', but that's all I can find to help out with cc&c. Thanks for the read!
person TicTac
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, well done. I don't see many Naruto/Lee fics and I liked this one.
person charmpit
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Strangely, Naruto topping Rock Lee is insanely hot. Thank you for this out-of-the-blue pleasure.