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OK so!!!! Two even three I get but four? I can't wait to see how you pull this one off especially since Kiba and Nar are more "brothers" than anything else. I hope within all this that Kiba does not get pushed out and oh, about those rules.... What I wouldn't give to see Nara and Neji - two geniuses, both strong willed and calculating. Not to mention that I truly think these two have the most to talk about which could very well lead to other things. That scene in the car between those two - Whoo! Anyway, amazing as usual!

Hmmm love you too! Yes I know you want more smut... I think the fangy muses are coming back... so breath and pray for me... those buggers are VICIOUS!

Wonderful job as always. *goes and make a safe landing spot for your next update.*

Kiba needs a freaking leash.

Ch 17: I love the NejiKiba banter! So Cute!

Ch. 18: Haha! That was so funny. Loved it! Especially Kiba's mom; she's great.
I had a little tear over Neji when he thought that he had no one that was protective towards him. *sniff*
Great chapter!

Lol, Kiba seems so desperate to get some of Neji. I don't know but the idea of Kiba topping Neji is so unappealing. It seems like he tries so hard to come across as seme but instead he comes across as 'bitchy uke.' You know those ukes that swear their seme so they go around ranting about how they are not an uke to everyone. Shikamaru on the other hand says he switches but he comes across as seme. I could see Shika bottoming to Kiba just to appeal to Kiba's need to be seme but I can't see Neji doing it.

On another note I like the contrast with moms, with Kiba's personality you would think he would have the crazy mom, instead he has the yaoi fangirl-ish mom, lol! Naruto seems so shy and such a pushover, when Kiba was yelling at him to come play, (even though he wasn't trying to be mean) I wanted to tell Nar to yell at him to fuck off. I think one of my highlights in this story will be the day he grows into his own skin. And Neji seems so desperate to be with them that its like he'll go along with whatever. But everything is give and take, he should start taking more instead of just giving. Yeah things are new, but Shika and Kiba have no problem with telling Neji what they want and its like you find yourself thinking besides being in the relationship with them, what does Neji want?

Anyway I have been pretty backed up on the chapters and just read the last 3 today so I am trying to condense my thoughts into this one review but I am forgetting somethings, oh well see you next chapter.

*unwraps the tentacle like arms from around my throat* Yes dear your beta and yours alone. You now I don't and won't beta for anyone else... sides between you and the muses I don't have time for any other author.

*Hides behind you and looks at your fangirls* yeah... so not scared... ummm... yeah...

Good job as always... Ya know I love your work. *hugs* Ja ne.

Amost passed out when I realized that there were too chapters! My computer is close to a window. Gotta be careful there! If you do that again, my head may go through! OOh I can't wait for that game after all with a "true seme" Kiba becomes a "confused uke". Yea!

Two chapters in one day. It's like I won the lottery. :) I can't wait to see how soccer goes. I like how Kiba says the rest of his family doesn't matter except for his mom and sister. That sounds like something Kiba would do. I long for Neji and Shika more than anyone. I think that's just because they are my two favorites...I like smart guys. :)

Hehe, awesome chapter!
I love them all. XD
Kiba's family is just as ''crazy'' as one could imagine.
And Shikaku is just great! XD
Detective, eh? And overprotective? Hehe, fits the imagine.
He's evil too! XD

Neji and Kiba are so cute. XD
I wonder how that soccer game is going to turn out. :D

Oh and: I can't believe I actually missed the previous chapter!
I was soo good. XD
Yay for smiling and breathtaking Neji! ;DD
Well, he surely had a reason to smile.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Heh, really good story, can't wait to read more!