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for The Choices Between Friends

by drivven

person HannaFO
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes meeting the folks :D
I'm so exsited about the soccer match :D
Thanks for the update!!
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Neji got three sexy boyfriends I am so jealous. I was right it was Kiba's fault (a little), well I'm happy now. And I won't kill you, if I killed you then you won't be able to write this sexy story. So good job!
person qwerty
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. That was a hella good chapter. Things are going to go insane when the fact that Neji has a boyfriend leaks to the rest of the college, nevermind the rest of the Hyuugas.
I can feel that a confrontation is nigh between Neji and one of the Hyuugas as he goes to his house. I really want to see how Neji handles that!
I really hope Kiba will learn to love Neji as much as Naruto does. I don't want to see him back out because a foursome is definitely hotter than a threesome! Heh.
Seriously though, I feel that all four of them are going to learn a lot from one another, and are going to end up for the better.
Awesome job!
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanx for the acknowledgement even though I wasn't expecting it. It still amazes me how many writers take the time to respond to their reviewers! I think that is thougtful! So thanx again. I must say that I am getting nervous. I empathize with the Nara!... Kiba too. I hope the boys figure it out and work it out. After all if the two geniuses can't get it together??? But then again, Naruto always fixes things with his heart! I'm on pins and needles for the next chappie! Until then!
person charmpit
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! You are back! I have missed you. I'm happy to see your update!

Neji sticks out like a sore thumb, ne? I think all the dads are on to him. I can't wait until Shika's mom shows up!
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh no why did they let him leave? please write more soon!
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*whistles innocently* You really are gonna be in trouble ma dear.

And to all your readers... sorry for being a slow beta XD I is bad... but like our wonderful Drivven muses (again some with fangs though not the same as her) keep nibbling in the back of my mind... *le sigh*

Anyhoo sis love ya lots. *hugs*
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has turned out to be a choice between friends. I think everything will work out, but that's because i'm optomistic. So plz plz please let everything work out for them!!!! I'm going wind up dreaming about this now. Great chapter btw. I do wonder why shika was withdrawn. Seemed OOC... Love you ^_^
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It has Neji and Shikamaru (and I love them both), plus Kiba and Naruto. What more could a person ask for? And, it's written well. The idea is great. I could see Neji out 'slummin it'. I smile every time the story is updated. Now I want to know what's going to happen...they have to keep Neji. It wouldn't feel right if they didn't. He's so happy around them. *waits anxiously at the edge of her seat to find out what happens*
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I don't know why you would think that we woud be angry with Neji this chapter. Although I do see the difficulty with the decision he is asking them to make, as it would require commitment which is such a strong word. But I am sure when things first started with Neji they had to at least think something of a long term as they seem to be smitten with him. I just hope they make this decision soon, so the other two can get more screen time, everything has been pretty much Neji and Shika so far. The other two have hardly gotten any love which is a shame because Nar is my favorite. Anyway looking forward to the next chapter.