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OMG, DL. Your not supposed to send your readers to someone else's stories!!!!! At least do it at the end of your fic. Then again, I'm pretty damn certain no one would leave your fic before they've read it. This was a great chapter (hate Sasuke much??) As usual, my only complaint was that it was too short. Hell, it could be 40 pgs and still be too short. and Shino and Neji with the other three???? Man that could be hard to write. How many hands and um.... other important parts does that make all together any way????
lol

Slave

Yay! for Shino-baby! So everyone want Neji's ass, I feel sorry for him. I wonder is he going to become friends with Shino now that he is being to feel for other people beside himself? Well whatever the chapter was good, you are good for witing it and I hope you update soon.

Ah, here we are: enter Sasuke Uchiha.

And in this chapter he is bearing witness to the fact that he is MADE OF FAIL.

And in this case it DOESN'T suck to be him, although he wishes it did, LOL (eh, I kill me ^_^).

Face it, one Uchiha alone just doesn't compare to the threesome that's currently sending Neji's mind into subspace!

Maybe Neji should take pity on the Uchiha-pet and bring him next time--so that Naruto can show him how it's done.

That would be SO choice!

Next!

"So, the spiky brunette is the mouth, the big one is the muscle, and ponytail is the brains. Naruto was the pet."
You know that total gets the group, I can see Naruto as the pet that everyone protects, Shikamaru scheming behind the scenes, Kiba being their spokesperson, though I would have thought Shino, Chouji totally fits the part as protector. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Butterflyy

I think I said this before during the last chapter I am not sure, but Gods I love your Neji. He is like a walking fairy tale, in the sense that he gives you that warm and fluffy feeling everytime you're around him. No wonder why Naruto and Shikamaru are hooked. Anyway Neji was a total gentleman with Shika, it was really sweet. And he better take care my Naru, as Naruto's the most mentally/emotionally stunted, I think if anything were to happen as in their relationship going sour or something like that he would be the most affected. I am actually a ??/Naru person, in the sense that I like most of the male cast with Naruto, but it was your story that had me thinking of NejiNaru, which is a pairing I usually bypass so kudos to you. And I think having Shika and Kiba there is just an added bonus.

Loved this chapter, see you next one!

*blows nose* Just to damn cute!! Brilliant work on this fic :D

I love your Neji in this, but I have to admit, I'm hoping Naruto gets a bit more agressive. I kinda like him out of control. lol as if you couldn't tell by my fics!
Slave

Oooh, Neji wants something more serious with the three?
I mean, wants to be more than a fuck buddy?
Cutie pumpkin.. xDD

But will it happen, I wonder.
Shika and Neji were absolutely cute in this chapter! xD

Heh, nice chapter once again!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

I'm really digging this story. It's really good!
You have a great writing style.
Can't wait to see more!
update!

"I am Neji Hyuuga. I am the man who wants to kiss you so badly that it is nearly painful not to."

Yoroshiku onegai shimasu, Neji. I am the woman who wants to! OMFG Neji is completely sprung on Shika-kun, and who wouldn't be?! Shikamaru is HOT, HOT, HOT!!!!! ShikaNejiShika is one of my favorite pairings so I was delighted to read them having some alone time, making out before Shikamaru's class. Way sexy!

Next chapter!