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for The Choices Between Friends

by drivven

person Twiggies
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aah.. so hot!
They're sexy and adorable!
Especially KIba and Naruto. xD
Loving this fic.

I hope you keep writing! Update soon again!
person DownTownWoman
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this the end? I hope not. You ended the chapter so nicely with them all snuggling up together. I like the fact that they all broke a rule to pleasure the other. I also like the fact that no one was left unpleasured, ehehe, if that made sense. I hope there is more. If not, then I hope you write more fics. Probably some more with Kiba in it since we both agree that there are hardly any fics here with Kiba in them. Again, if I didn't say it before, love the chapter/ story if you're ending it.
Until next time,
DownTownWoman
person HannaFO
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot'n sweet XD Hehe really just to kawaii!!
person llyoung
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. These four together are fantastic.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sexy sexy sexy!!!!
person qwerty
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Sweet ending to a very hot chapter.
update!
person charmpit
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG they did it!! Sensational!!!!!! (I AM PSYCHIC, LOL)

I felt like I was in the room with them; I blushed the entire time I was reading. Way erotic!

I would like to know how Neji will explain looking like he was assaulted by the hose attachment to a vacuum cleaner when he returns home?

Fuck that was hot.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Snuggles* You know I love you don't you?

Can't wait for more doll.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwh their all cute together. I like this story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person charmpit
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH HOLY SHIT!

One down, three more to go!!!

Awesome fic!