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Woohoo! More thickens than the plot, I tell you!

So they're all going to share. Who's going to bottom for whom, I wonder? I bet money Shika-kun and Neji-kun are the pitchers. Kiba-kun and Naru-kun are the catchers. Chouji-kun ends up being scorekeeper. Dirty job, that.

So...I was wrong when I said four hot boys...does that mean that Chouji-kun is not going to participate, bringing the total to three?

I'm all aflutter just thinking about it. Believe it.

Neji was throughly enjoy his neck being nibbled on, he wondered who was doing it since he had been blindfolded, though if the body matched the face he was sure the person was sexier than he was. He screamed out as his swollen member was engulfed by a warm heat, 'this must be what heaven is like.' he thought to himself.

Maments later he awoke in a cold sweat and a dampness between his legs, he had been wrong, that was no dream, it was a nightmare as Gai and Lee were 'revealed' to him once the blindfold in his dream was removed. He didn't think he would ever be able to sleep again.

Love You!!!!!! *runs fast and far away*

Heheh, I wonder when the trap will be sprung!

*gives your arm a nice hard pinch*

Now my little Sai twin... why did you not tell me you were posting this? (Excuse me, had posted this?) Tch, must always find out the hard way since getting stuff out of you and 'Sasuke' is like pulling teeth from a hungry lion...*hugs*

This is getting interesting, pleas continue

"Neji doesn't strike me as timid."

Hell no, he's not timid! Why on earth would that Adonis be timid? He's got four hot boys practically begging for his time and attention. He could take them in shifts or all at once if he wanted!

I love how Chouji is the guard dog. It makes me think of my own friendships. I have been called the 'guard dog' more than once by my friends. It suits me I think. Chouji's character in this fic, therefore, is one after my own heart.

I am so enjoying this! Please continue writing! And make sure Shikamaru gets a piece of that!

Hehehe!! Now now Neji, don't come off as "Slumming"!! Personally, I think he will do just fine :-).

Thanks for the ever fast updates :D hope Neji won't overdo it.. Don't want Naruto thinking he's not serious!

So, the spiky brunette is the mouth, the big one is the muscle, and ponytail is the brains. Naruto was the pet.

Looks like Naruto "the pet" has a new owner! One who seems to like Shika's body art. Hmmm...I can't wait to see where this goes!

Thank you for updating so quickly. I am enjoying this story!

Well now! The fair Neji goes for the gold--and gets it! I can't say I blame him--who wouldn't want a piece of Naruto cake?

Having said that, with the addition of the (even more) sexy Shikamaru to the fold, it would be profoundly off-kilter to have them both in a fic without some form of intimate interaction between them (ShikaNeji forever!). Something to consider carefully.

You know what would really be hot though? A foursome--only Shika's gotta pitch and be hung like an army mule.

Next chapter please!!!!!