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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG DL, what are you planning?!
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, and I'm glad it is continuing. It would make a wonderful novel.
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November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! You should have let them cat it out. My money was on Tenten.
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't help but feel that they are a little controlling over Naruto at times. I mean, if the boy wants to get a piercing, what's the big deal? If no one likes it, then remove the jewelry and let it close up. Shika in particular is a little hypocritical since he is sporting tats himself.
It is sweet that Naru & Shika are sharing heavier feelings. I hope there will be some of their personal action in the next chapter.
It is sweet that Naru & Shika are sharing heavier feelings. I hope there will be some of their personal action in the next chapter.
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October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY S***! ~nosebleed~ One of the hottest stories I've ever read, but the story!! Props to you for actually having a plot! You've kept the characters true to who they are for the most part and added your own quirks to their personalities. It's captivating, thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us. I implore you, continue, and soon.
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October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It takes a lot of talent to write a legible foursome and so hot a that~! BRAVO!
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October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love those two together (Nar and Nara). I cant wait until all four of them are back together again. Loving this story so far.
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October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I will try not to get my hopes up for a resurrection, but I am AWFUL GLAD TO SEE AN UPDATE TO THIS STORY. And an awesome one at that! Now the relationships between them are starting to take their true form. I look forward to reading future updates to this.
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October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such a beautiful storyline, with very strong character descriptions and WONDERFUL lemons. I'm so glad you've continued it---
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Love Haku's new look in this too! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep going!