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August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like! I love the dynamic between the friends, and hopefully Cho isn't kept too much out of it because of the new addition. Wanna know more about Neji and his background! What about Hinata, will she be playing any part soon? More of Shikamaru as well! Nice people Nara have to keep in tow, very nice.. And Naruto's boss take the gold.
And that was the rant about how excited I was after reading your chapters in one go XD. On a different note, I like your writing style and your chapters have a good lenght, not too short, not too long.
And that was the rant about how excited I was after reading your chapters in one go XD. On a different note, I like your writing style and your chapters have a good lenght, not too short, not too long.
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All righty then... let's try this again: *Squees* How do I love the... let me count the chapters! Wonderful update as always hun and I am looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*gets up off the floor* OMFG ;lkaflakjdflkadj;ldj'flj'fjdlfjsd'fks;kf UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
I never thought I would see this day.
You have redeemed yourself admirably. ^_^
I never thought I would see this day.
You have redeemed yourself admirably. ^_^
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah I remember this story! SOOO good! A moresome that actually has DEPTH to it! Great chapter!
Keep going!
Keep going!
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a masterpiece!
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!! I was so happy to see that you updated. I was actually reading through this fic yesterday when i realized that it hadn't been updated recently and was a little sad. Anyway, i'm happy now! Looking forward to the next update!
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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the update... though I can hardly wait for more lemony goodness from you. *hugs* Keep up the good work sis!
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ITs a good sorry my only problem is with the nar nara thing with the names as shikamaru seems to be the only one with a last name usage and shortening narutos name to nar makes me think nara and i think you also confused it a few times in using it most people would just call naruto naru makes a little more sence and shika for shikamaru. i think its really unfair to shikamaru to have him called by his last name. other then that i like the story alot and can wait for more. The above is just a suggestion :)
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Howdy! I'm kinda new here, and I have to say, I'm loving your fic so far! I'd love it even more if it were just NejiShika, but since I'm a sucker for moresomes, it pretty much nulls it out xP Just something I need to point out; in Chapter 18 and Chapter 21 you added a confusing 'a' to Nar, at some point; don't remember where, but you'll find it once you read them through.
Anyways, nice job to you and your beta's for this fic. It's a shame that you haven't continued in so long. Is there any possibility of it ever continuing? If so, please let me know, I'd love to read more of this.
Anyways, nice job to you and your beta's for this fic. It's a shame that you haven't continued in so long. Is there any possibility of it ever continuing? If so, please let me know, I'd love to read more of this.
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now That is how you write a 4some and i will be waiting and holding my breath for the next chapter im just sorry it took me this long to read this tale now to move on to others