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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG if only.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, so sweet. I wouldn't mind waking up in that sandwich.
*pushes dirty thoughts back down*
I wonder what Shikamaru and Neji are going to do with Kiba and Naruto at work...
Can't wait for the next chapter.
*pushes dirty thoughts back down*
I wonder what Shikamaru and Neji are going to do with Kiba and Naruto at work...
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That had to be the sexiest two parted lemon Ever!!! *blood from nose spurts all over the place* I love you!!! Please marry me
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, and the hot foursome continues!
Super hot. 8D
Heh, finallt they all got their release. And a good nights sleep, I bet.
I just love their positions. xDD
I know they propably switch places and stuff, but I can't help but to love uke Neji. xD
And Naruto was so hot too! All of them were!
Shika and Neji were hotly seme and uke at the same time. 8DD -drools-
I love 'em all!
You write them so well!
And you really managed to write that hot foursome again. xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
But.. I'm still wondering where Neji has gotten that scar that was mentioned in one of the previous chapter..
Actually, in a chapter named ''Scars''. xD
I think I have a small guess, but you can never be sure, right? xD
I hope you update soon again!
Super hot. 8D
Heh, finallt they all got their release. And a good nights sleep, I bet.
I just love their positions. xDD
I know they propably switch places and stuff, but I can't help but to love uke Neji. xD
And Naruto was so hot too! All of them were!
Shika and Neji were hotly seme and uke at the same time. 8DD -drools-
I love 'em all!
You write them so well!
And you really managed to write that hot foursome again. xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
But.. I'm still wondering where Neji has gotten that scar that was mentioned in one of the previous chapter..
Actually, in a chapter named ''Scars''. xD
I think I have a small guess, but you can never be sure, right? xD
I hope you update soon again!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! It was definetly a compliment. As is for this chapter. I think that now that the boys have gotten to know one another, I hope that they slow it down a bit. I know that all four were anxious to explore, but I think that it is time that the boys talked a bit (this time with Neji) and got some one on one time with Neji as well.
I also can't wait to see when they meet the "college" boys. I hope Sasuke has a coronary.
I have more to say. But I will save it for after the next chapter. Until then...
I also can't wait to see when they meet the "college" boys. I hope Sasuke has a coronary.
I have more to say. But I will save it for after the next chapter. Until then...
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Do you have degree in writing high class porn? That was so hot that I wish I was a gay man! You are now forever known as Yaoi Goddess to me.
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should at least offer us cigarettes before you spring a chapter like that one on us! OMG I thought I was going to have a heart attack!
Fuck that was hot.
Fuck that was hot.
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAII!!!!!
Now that was hot!!! *eyes gleam* I wonder what will happen when Neji learns that Kiba can't fuck Nar...... *cackles softly*
Great job hon! *dances* that was like one of the hottest things ever!!!! *waits for more*
Now that was hot!!! *eyes gleam* I wonder what will happen when Neji learns that Kiba can't fuck Nar...... *cackles softly*
Great job hon! *dances* that was like one of the hottest things ever!!!! *waits for more*
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok no funny acrobatics, this one! I thought the lemon was really great here and I loved the emotional play going on during it. So yeah I give it three thumbs up, lol!
And oh no you have misunderstood. I never said anything with Nar and Kiba together, you had made it abundantly clear throughout that they don't see each other that way, and its not happening. I had said that Nar and Nara could be doing something while Kiba screws Neji, but its okay even though you misunderstood, ironically enough you managed to get the gist of what I was saying this chapter, as implied by the positions.
As far as the other thing I must have explained it wrong, sorry here's clarification. To 'top from the bottom' has nothing to do with who's penetrating who, who's uke or who's seme, its not something you take literally, its more of a saying. You would probably hear it used a lot in yaoi fanfiction and/or in the gay community. It means what you implied last chapter in regards to Naruto, and what you shown this chapter. You see how Naruto was pretty agressive when riding Nara or being screwed by Neji, to 'top from the bottom' refers to an uke (bottom) who doesn't really play the role of a typical 'uke' in bed, they are aggressive, they give as much as or more than they take, etc. Bottom and top are just positions in reference to gay sex, just because someone is the uke doesn't mean they can't be the one in control and essentially that's where the phrase comes from. I am not sure if I explained it good enough but I hope that clarified some things. But on another note, looking forward to the next chapter.
And oh no you have misunderstood. I never said anything with Nar and Kiba together, you had made it abundantly clear throughout that they don't see each other that way, and its not happening. I had said that Nar and Nara could be doing something while Kiba screws Neji, but its okay even though you misunderstood, ironically enough you managed to get the gist of what I was saying this chapter, as implied by the positions.
As far as the other thing I must have explained it wrong, sorry here's clarification. To 'top from the bottom' has nothing to do with who's penetrating who, who's uke or who's seme, its not something you take literally, its more of a saying. You would probably hear it used a lot in yaoi fanfiction and/or in the gay community. It means what you implied last chapter in regards to Naruto, and what you shown this chapter. You see how Naruto was pretty agressive when riding Nara or being screwed by Neji, to 'top from the bottom' refers to an uke (bottom) who doesn't really play the role of a typical 'uke' in bed, they are aggressive, they give as much as or more than they take, etc. Bottom and top are just positions in reference to gay sex, just because someone is the uke doesn't mean they can't be the one in control and essentially that's where the phrase comes from. I am not sure if I explained it good enough but I hope that clarified some things. But on another note, looking forward to the next chapter.