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Awh, the sexyness. 8D
The sexyness you interrupted! D8
Hehe, can't wait to read the next chappie.. -drools already-

Really good chapter once again!
Now we know what the three hotties want from Neji. xDD
For now that is. :D
We almost got to the point.. But then the chapter ended.. XDD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Really good chapter once again!

tease~! ;)

It'a almost that I don't know what to say about this entire story because it is not finished. I think that I've admonished enough, and I do not feel confortable giving constructive criticisms yet even though I really don't have any for this yet.

I will say that I am on the edge of my seat. Not for the physical aspects of their relationship but more for the emotional and how it is all going to work out. I'm a bit worried here, it's like I want a happy ending which is so much cliched, but at the same time it's hard to imagine one for these four just because of thier differences in backgrounds, upbringings, and not to mention the emotional baggage that is evident in each character. I would assume that this is going to be a longer story because there is no much that we don't know about all of the boys, especially Neji. I'm also a bit on edge because of that. These three with the exception of maybe Nara are so bent on getting Neji that they have not considered the "issues" of jumping into bed without really knowing a person. Maybe they have - you did not reveal the specifics of their conversation.

I was hoping that Neji and Nara can talk things out more - since they seem to be the ones that "think". Also, I was surprised about Nara's character in the car. He seemed a bit nervous and out of the character that you created in him. Is this a new side? Nervous, unassured, and intimidated.

Ok, I written enough! It's your story and as I said before, I cannot wait to see how this all pans out. I guess that's what makes this an intriguing story - making us readers want more!

*protects you from angry reviewers threatening death and waving pitchforks and torches* I missed you! Though i'm sure you didn't realize my absence. Delicious! Looking forward to that sexy lemon....*off in smutty daze*...

GAH!!!!!! *deep breaths* Oh you are a tease, cutting off there. It's all right though; I've done it to people before. I'm just excited for the next part. I can wait like a good girl. It'll be like Christmas morning when you update again, because I know what kind of present I'll be getting. *impish grin*

You are an evil evil woman! How could you stop right there, you lucky I was watching the Olympics while I was read this or I'll be even more upset. I know I will enjoy the foursome coming up but I'm more looking forward to the drama that you will write. So keep up the great work and update soon.

The plot thickens! I am sort of sure that no full blown lemon will happen next, but at least some oral all around, right? Even if a foursome does happen I'll still be happy. And I'm kind of sad that it seems like no one in Neji's family care about him, what happen to Hinata. Anyway Keep up the good work, can't wait for more drama.

Hehee, awesome chapter! xD From the beginning to the end.
Playing/handling balls indeed!
Neji really is good at everything..
Except in resisting Kiba and the others. xD
Meh, he is a man after all.

And Kiba just keeps on teasing Neji.
He and Naruto are evil when bored. xD
Heh, I really hope Kiba finally gets his piece of Neji soon. xD
Well, actually they all have been waiting long ebough already. xDD

Poor Neji though. His bastard of an uncle surely didn't kiss his forehead when Neji was little.

Hehe, I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I can only guess what kind of plans Kiba has. xD

man i love this story. really glad they are working things out. are you going to have the boyfriends meet neji's roommates anytime soon?if so, i was just wondering if u could possibly have one of them be like naruto's ex boy friend (like itachi or maybe eve gaara) as to explain why he didnt want to get close too anyone just a suggestion. cant wait to see what they do too poor (or lucky)neji. lucky bastard getting three hot guys

Kiba and Naruto are so naughty! The soccer was fun to read. It made me laugh that Shikamaru would lose chess on purpose just to get Neji home faster. Awww. He really wants to go get dirty. I also laughed when Neji was embarrassed about making out with Kiba, worrying about more happening, while he in Kiba's mom's house. *dances before sitting down and bouncing on the edge of the chair waiting for the next chapter* (I'll pretend I'm patient though).