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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i read ur story and i just wanted to let you know i LOVED it i hope theres more chapters on the way =)
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, oi i cant belive its over. i really liked it too.... its still good ^^.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have one thing to say. YOU ARE CRAZY lol. love the story though. had me laughing alot especially at kyuubi's speech. does he really have to say it every time lol.
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter four of this story, and i think its' wonderful! 'Demon Prince and the Golden Shadow' was really my brothers' story, he and i shared this account a few months back before he went off and got a life with some college girl.... either way, I'm not gonna bite your head off for using that scene
Now I can just hope to find his dratted pen drive so I can put that story back up... all the others on here now are mine....
Now I can just hope to find his dratted pen drive so I can put that story back up... all the others on here now are mine....
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!!! Loving every word!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, that had to hurt even if Naruto saw it coming. Great first chapter!
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
funny!
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snickers uncontrollably at last chapter's ending* umm, this is the first time i've read this, and i must say, though it could use help in spots (what works don't) it's a really interesting and thought out story. and i love Kyuubi taking Itachi as a mate, that's just hghly amusing. like i prefer to think, sasu/naru is flexible, but Kyuu tops anytime. even fem Kyuubi tops people.. *winks*
can't wait to read more and i hope the writing goes well. i sympathize with busy schedules. so update when you can and i hope to see more of our cute little group!! later!
can't wait to read more and i hope the writing goes well. i sympathize with busy schedules. so update when you can and i hope to see more of our cute little group!! later!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to point something out.
The lemon kind of confused me. It started out with Naruto being seme, even preparing Sasuke...then it switched to Naruto being uke...yet, at the end Naruto pointed out he wasn't shoving his fingers up anyone's ass anymore. Not sure what happened there...but, it kind of took away from the lemon.
The lemon kind of confused me. It started out with Naruto being seme, even preparing Sasuke...then it switched to Naruto being uke...yet, at the end Naruto pointed out he wasn't shoving his fingers up anyone's ass anymore. Not sure what happened there...but, it kind of took away from the lemon.
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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have said it before and I'll say it again, You Do Great Work!! I am really loving this story. It has comedy and serious angst. I love the Kyu/Ita pairing too. There is not enough of those two in stories. I'll be waiting for more from you.