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for When music melts the heart

by Deandraquin

person nawatia
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! So sweet!
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, so sweet. Loved the chapter.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was nice, they always seem to have a good time and good conversation with each other. It was also amusing to see Iruka in his goosip mode. Its a change from his normal 'mother hen' mode. And I found this line to be adorably cute “Me and ramen have been in a relationship for forever but we are free to see others.”

Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, Itachi and Naruto, they make such a sweet couple.
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL loved the Ramen love confession, very funny, thanks for that.
Great chp, can't wait to read more.

Love Robyn
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cute! Even better that Naruto doesn't know how rich Itachi is. It gives them a little more freedom to fall in love without materialistic things getting in the way. I wonder how Naruto will react when he does find out though. I also wonder how Naruto and Sasuke will get along...
person charmpit
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How sweet! Everything is moving along so leisurely. I am enjoying this nice Itachi who finally gets some hang time with Naruto. Frankly, SasuNaru is a tad overdone, and this is a pleasant diversion. Will Sasuke and Naruto actually interact in this fic? Will there be a triangle here that does NOT involve ramen, LOL?

Please keep writing.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwee! I loved this chapter it was s sweet and funyy. Poor Sasuke being ignored, I would if he'll ever get to might Naruto.
=)
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It's Itachi! I could so use some ITaNaru right now!
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am totally in love with your story "When Music Melts the Heart". It is very cute and I can't help but smile as I read it. Do you have an email notification list? If so could you put me on it please. I don't want to risk missing any updates from you! My email is: nightsahdow009 @ yahoo. com