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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be honest and tell you that I didn't like how you portrayed Kakashi at first. Then again it's not how I'm use to seeing him portrayed. It grew on me, and as I read it made more and more sense. Also I've never read a story that's had me burst into fits of giggles randomly, as much as this has. I really hope to see more of this story in the near future. And by the way, a speechless Gai was pure awesome.
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please come back!
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I did the creepy fan-girl giggle all the way through this fic. *shivers*
It was too cute not to though! I now have a new mission after reading this fic.
To try apple pancakes.
I doubt I can make them like Iruka can, but I'll try!
This fic was a wonderful read. First chapter I was a little sceptical as to if Kakashi would act as he did, but over the course of the story it became more beliveable. I now have a new insight to Kakashi that I haven't ever had before. I think you've set a new standerd for me whem it comes to KakashixIruka fiction, well done!
I can't wait for the next chapter, see you then! ~Passing Reader
It was too cute not to though! I now have a new mission after reading this fic.
To try apple pancakes.
I doubt I can make them like Iruka can, but I'll try!
This fic was a wonderful read. First chapter I was a little sceptical as to if Kakashi would act as he did, but over the course of the story it became more beliveable. I now have a new insight to Kakashi that I haven't ever had before. I think you've set a new standerd for me whem it comes to KakashixIruka fiction, well done!
I can't wait for the next chapter, see you then! ~Passing Reader
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I giggled and nearly cried my way through the chapter. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Omg...it's so incredible! Cookie and Pakkun cracked me up!
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww - this story is just too cute for words! I love it :)
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!~!!!!!!!!!!!! This chapter is so amazingly awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A pig???? LOL That is definitely not a pet I would have envisioned. I love the part where Kakashi allows Iruka to comfort him in his moment of darkness. However the last part was got me squealing like a fangirl! Kakashi is sharing his apple pancakes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I always love your work but I think you have outdone yourself with this chapter! Great job on the writing!
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. pakkun is such a big baby. but i'm sure he loves cookie like a brother. are there really nin-pigs lol. but kashi is really starting to learn alot he just doesn't know it. wow to share iruka's pancakes that must have been an unimaginable feat for him.
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nayru Sensei! Youre alive. (By the way this is Alynaes Flerevi.. ) Anyway weve all missed you.
Great but slightly odd chapter. But I loved the end. Poor Kakashi really loooves his Iruka's pancakes.
Please update sooner this time.(If you cant ok.. but please try?)
Great but slightly odd chapter. But I loved the end. Poor Kakashi really loooves his Iruka's pancakes.
Please update sooner this time.(If you cant ok.. but please try?)
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooo
omg!!!
i love this story!! its soooo cute... clueless/adorable/naive kakashi is so ....cute...
is redundant, but who cares!
please update soon
*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
omg!!!
i love this story!! its soooo cute... clueless/adorable/naive kakashi is so ....cute...
is redundant, but who cares!
please update soon
*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this sweet and warm story~!