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for Teach Me To Love You

by nayru

schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
These chapters keep getting better and better. I cried and laughed my way through them. This is a wonderful tale and so very real to the heart. Thank you for sharing it with us, and I hope to see more soon when time permits you. I truly hope life lets up on you and lets you create!
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update and i will give u a cookie this is one of the best stories ive read in a long time please continue
person clowangel
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story a lot. I really do...but I was wondering.. How come some other characters that show up in their lives don't make appearances in this fic? Like Naruto or Sakura? They're both Iruka's ex-students and Kakashi's students as well. Especially Naruto who happens to adore Iruka. Only Gai, Genma, Anko and Raido ever made appearances and were only used to develop Iruka and Kakashi's relationship. It kinda feels like something is missing because of that. Of course I also enjoy seeing development between them but yeah, there's still a little something missing without some of the rookie 12 making their appearances.

Or maybe they're missing because this fic is taking place during Naruto's two year training trip with Jiraiya? You never mentioned the time line I don't think, so I can't say for sure.
person Mel
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you FINALLY updated. I thought Id never see another chapter again. Glad you did though. Loving this but um...do you have a beta? Just curious, anyhoo, keep up the good work and update soon.
person Sir Magus
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like ur story so far, i think your diagnosis of kakashi's psyche is well interpreted, i always thought the aloof thing was a mask. im looking forward to the next chapter
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaah! Youre like my favorite author- why have you stopped updating? Youre usually so good about keeping up with a story. T.T Please come back. And if youre dead...welll...ghostwriter and all. I NEED THIS STORY!!!
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person Anon
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really adore this story, I hadn't seen any updates for a while so I had to search for it to find it, lol, seems I missed a chapter so it was a nice suprise to read. I know Kakashi is a bit ooc, but I love how you gave his character a new dimension and it's realistic in a way because you've made it stem from events in the actual story-line. The whole restaurant scene was so cute too, I was like 'aww' myself. Can't wait to read more.
person MeLaiya
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was so sweet. and I absolutely LOVED this part "They leave?!”, Kakashi gasped, let go of the Chuunin and hastily took out his list." LOL, the list was great. LOVED IT!!!
person naracest
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I've run out of chapters! This is terrible! This story is really good. I liked how in the first chapter Iruka was kinda the tweaked one. SO how long til kakashi admits that he loves Iruka? Do they ever get it on? I mean, make sweet, passionate love? Yeah, that's what i meant. Great story. Puuuuleeeeze update soon.
Cheers
Meg
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. I hope there will be more soon.