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December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting story, but why the hell does Naruto act like a doormat as if he were his canon persona? The way he let's Maya walk all over him is rather annoying, beautiful girl or not. Hopefully the entire story won't be filled with this shit. I was actually looking forward to Naruto taking revenge on Sasuke due to his actions. Yet Maya had to go and screw that up. How lame.
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October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I keep wondering what will happen next. Who will he fallin love with? Aya or Maya? Or has he already fallen in love with one? Then the action...ooohhhh i just get shivers everytime I read it. Update soon or i might die. ( treary face ) please?
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story hope u up date it soon
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the rewirte the frist 1 di make any sence at all goodluck and keep wirteing ^^
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the detail in the story. Especially like how you seem to slip a whole new team into the original storyline. I can't wait to see how it all turns out. Please continue it.
I would like to know if you're going to follow the original storyline all the way through or if you plan on seperating the main characters from it at some point.
I would like to know if you're going to follow the original storyline all the way through or if you plan on seperating the main characters from it at some point.
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I in all honesty perfered the former version. I think that it had more story to it. but that is just me.