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April 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I have been following your story and love how it is turning out, I hope you continue it
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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry so much about the time it takes to get a new chapter out, they're always worth the wait! It's ready when it's ready :)
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March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, i have read it from start to finish several times. i can't wait to see what happens next
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February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I need morre I realy love this and I remember freaking out when it was confirmed. That he was takashi I LOVE IT SO MUCH
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January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story.... i was hooked right from the beginning.... i cant wait to see what happens next.... please update as soon as you can.... i would like to receive emails on when you update... you can email me at cherryblossomlover24@hotmail.com..... as i was reading the chapters i had picked up on things that you had mentioned at the bottom of the chapters.... again a really good story..... have my attention with it
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a fantastic fic. This has been in my collection for awhile and I only just read it all ch 1 - 50. Sad to get to the end and now have to wait for the next chapter. I love the way you have fit Naruto, Sasuke and Hinata together, it works so well and I am hoping Neji gets the right person for him too. LOL. Thank you for such a great story, It only took three days to read it all life just keeps getting in the way. Anyway congrats on the news of the baby, look forward to finding out what you have. My sisters little ones keep me going, busy little boys. Good luck on the move and hope to see you with a new chapter soon.
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August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh child,what a chapter!!! I wish I could draw because the images that came through your words were inspiring. The sensuality just jumped off the page. I don't know if I have the words to describe how much I enjoyed this chapter but I'll give it my best try^^.
I really like how you showed the deepening strength of the connection,physically and emotionally, between Naruto, Sasuke, and Hinata. How Hinata was finally comfortable enough to ask nee demand what she desired. Who knew she was so voyeuristic^_^.
How Sasuke could see the strength in his submission instead of weakness. He even felt secure enough to let his need to belong show along with a little of his hope for more(love,though it won't admit it yet).
I think Naruto's intensity in the chapter came from the feeling of completeness that having his mates both want each other and their family gave him.
This chapter also left me with lots to wonder about but I think I've rambled enough^^. I'd like to leave you with a CONGRATS(throws confetti) on the baby number 2. May you have a happy, healthy, and morning sickness free pregnacy. Also on the review milestone. You deserve that and a lot more.
I really like how you showed the deepening strength of the connection,physically and emotionally, between Naruto, Sasuke, and Hinata. How Hinata was finally comfortable enough to ask nee demand what she desired. Who knew she was so voyeuristic^_^.
How Sasuke could see the strength in his submission instead of weakness. He even felt secure enough to let his need to belong show along with a little of his hope for more(love,though it won't admit it yet).
I think Naruto's intensity in the chapter came from the feeling of completeness that having his mates both want each other and their family gave him.
This chapter also left me with lots to wonder about but I think I've rambled enough^^. I'd like to leave you with a CONGRATS(throws confetti) on the baby number 2. May you have a happy, healthy, and morning sickness free pregnacy. Also on the review milestone. You deserve that and a lot more.
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June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh,my...AHHHHH!! When I saw the update I expected either The Chat or The Reveal not both at once. Not only did I do my happy dance, I even broke out the cabbage patch for the awesomeness of these chapters^_^.
It never occurred to me that Naruto didn't know about his father and mother. It probably should have but I just assumed he knew. His reaction just made me want to hug him. So glad Sasuke and Hinata were there to give him all the love and support he needed. I also liked that Tsunade was accepting of their triad and how they balanced each other but realistic about the reactions they might receive from the rest of the village.
In chapter 2,Takeshi's reveal as Itachi was a lot less bloody than I thought it would be0o0. Tsunade always was a shrewd leader. She never was one to waste an opportunity to use information to the best advantage. And talk about having the right cool-headed ninjas to back her in Kekashi and Ibiki. Those two were never ones to react over emotionally.
Speaking of emotins the emotional fallout from Itachi's return is going to be huge. I cannot imagine the all the places the story will go from here but I am looking forward to the ride^^.
It never occurred to me that Naruto didn't know about his father and mother. It probably should have but I just assumed he knew. His reaction just made me want to hug him. So glad Sasuke and Hinata were there to give him all the love and support he needed. I also liked that Tsunade was accepting of their triad and how they balanced each other but realistic about the reactions they might receive from the rest of the village.
In chapter 2,Takeshi's reveal as Itachi was a lot less bloody than I thought it would be0o0. Tsunade always was a shrewd leader. She never was one to waste an opportunity to use information to the best advantage. And talk about having the right cool-headed ninjas to back her in Kekashi and Ibiki. Those two were never ones to react over emotionally.
Speaking of emotins the emotional fallout from Itachi's return is going to be huge. I cannot imagine the all the places the story will go from here but I am looking forward to the ride^^.
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am not surprised by the Hyuga clan elders at all. I see they wasted no time in using Hiashi's absence as a means to try to get Hinata to fall in line with their dictates. They probably figured without Hiashi's vocal support that she would be easier to influence. The clan elders fail to realize that Hinata has grown into a confident woman with her own mind. They may wound her with their accusations and assumptions but they won't break her.
Was it your intent that readers sympathize with Kyuubi during his convo with Naruto? If so you succeeded. He seemed so old and tired of spirit. I got the sense that even without Naruto's prodding his plan was to get as far away from humans as possible.
As for a possible time deviation or view shift,I don't mind either way. I know that may seem non-committal but I'm all for what's best for you as an author. Like you said this chapter felt like a filler to you. I only think it did because you know where you want the story to go and are anxious to get there. So whether it's The Reveal or The Chat next update I'm still doing my happy dance^_^.
Was it your intent that readers sympathize with Kyuubi during his convo with Naruto? If so you succeeded. He seemed so old and tired of spirit. I got the sense that even without Naruto's prodding his plan was to get as far away from humans as possible.
As for a possible time deviation or view shift,I don't mind either way. I know that may seem non-committal but I'm all for what's best for you as an author. Like you said this chapter felt like a filler to you. I only think it did because you know where you want the story to go and are anxious to get there. So whether it's The Reveal or The Chat next update I'm still doing my happy dance^_^.
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May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, Sasuke has become quite adept at submitting to his alpha^^. That imagery of his half smile and bared throat was killer and the kiss just took it over the top for me. I love how he's always so aware of Naruto's emotions and can react to rein them in when they're reaching a boiling point.
I must tell you again how much I enjoy your Hinata. Even when she's a little leery Hinata's never afraid to be her own woman or make her own decisions.
Maybe I have read too may shifter romances but I wonder if it's wrong that I found Naruto's need to mark Hinata sexy or that the act itself was kind of sensual? Even though there was some pain it seems Hinata may agree with the sentiment. Outside of the mark being a secondary tracking it's just one way Naruto can show his love.
It's always a pleasure to read and review such a well written story. You did an excellent job of weaving the tension of Naruto's barely restrained emotions throughout the chapter. After the build-up, his marking of Hinata was as much a release for the reader as it was for Naruto. I also would like to thank you for taking the time respond to your reviewers even with your busy RL. Looking forward to future chapters and anticipating Takeshi's story.
I must tell you again how much I enjoy your Hinata. Even when she's a little leery Hinata's never afraid to be her own woman or make her own decisions.
Maybe I have read too may shifter romances but I wonder if it's wrong that I found Naruto's need to mark Hinata sexy or that the act itself was kind of sensual? Even though there was some pain it seems Hinata may agree with the sentiment. Outside of the mark being a secondary tracking it's just one way Naruto can show his love.
It's always a pleasure to read and review such a well written story. You did an excellent job of weaving the tension of Naruto's barely restrained emotions throughout the chapter. After the build-up, his marking of Hinata was as much a release for the reader as it was for Naruto. I also would like to thank you for taking the time respond to your reviewers even with your busy RL. Looking forward to future chapters and anticipating Takeshi's story.