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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Naruto (Or Kyuubi) was so ''worried'' if Kimi hurt his prey.
That's only natural though... Neji IS his meal. XDD
Mm, a black swan. Rare. But the weakest of kind. Not pleasing Neji much? XD
But thankfully Neji's naturally strong.
Meh, I wonder if Neji's gonna tell about Naruto.
It would be like betraying a friend, but on the other hand it would help Neji.
Tricky. XD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again.
That's only natural though... Neji IS his meal. XDD
Mm, a black swan. Rare. But the weakest of kind. Not pleasing Neji much? XD
But thankfully Neji's naturally strong.
Meh, I wonder if Neji's gonna tell about Naruto.
It would be like betraying a friend, but on the other hand it would help Neji.
Tricky. XD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay!
A black swan? So cool.
Beautiful. Finally it's revealed! xD
No wonder the Kyuubi considers Neji as his meal. xDD
Kimi and Neji are really good fighters, and you wrote the scene well.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I can't wait to read more!
A black swan? So cool.
Beautiful. Finally it's revealed! xD
No wonder the Kyuubi considers Neji as his meal. xDD
Kimi and Neji are really good fighters, and you wrote the scene well.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I can't wait to read more!
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo!! Black swan = yes!!! =^^= hehehe
The last two chapters were pretty awesome. I loved the peak within Naruto's mindscape. The fact that the fox rejected him by openly admiting they were using each other was sort of like a slap in the face, but the practicality of it is a lot more cannon the the usual fox-treating-Naruto-like-its-actual-kit stories. Naruto needs a hug.
Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
The last two chapters were pretty awesome. I loved the peak within Naruto's mindscape. The fact that the fox rejected him by openly admiting they were using each other was sort of like a slap in the face, but the practicality of it is a lot more cannon the the usual fox-treating-Naruto-like-its-actual-kit stories. Naruto needs a hug.
Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I've been given props! hehehe (Review props is like, my cup of tea. Awesome!)
Anyway, another great chapter. ^^ A somewhat depressed merged Naruto is always a welcome thing in my book. I love the fact you took the time to explore Naruto's feelings in this chapter. I think its the first time we've really gotten to see inside his head (no pun intended) in this story. I'm still interested in finding out more about Kimi and what kind of freaky bird-person-type-thing that Neji's turned into. Keep up the great work! :D
Anyway, another great chapter. ^^ A somewhat depressed merged Naruto is always a welcome thing in my book. I love the fact you took the time to explore Naruto's feelings in this chapter. I think its the first time we've really gotten to see inside his head (no pun intended) in this story. I'm still interested in finding out more about Kimi and what kind of freaky bird-person-type-thing that Neji's turned into. Keep up the great work! :D
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mm, I'm really liking this Kimi.
Heh, some sort of shape-shifter she said? Bird and human's DNA.
Is Neji like that too? Seems like it. But he can't really ''transform'' yet, can he? Not without passing out. xD
And poor Naruto. Well, we all have those moments.
At first Kyuubi and Naruto were so adorable, the blond cuddling with one of his tails...
But then they started talking about using and tools. xDDD
I hope everything will be alright.
Keep writing and update soon again!
Heh, some sort of shape-shifter she said? Bird and human's DNA.
Is Neji like that too? Seems like it. But he can't really ''transform'' yet, can he? Not without passing out. xD
And poor Naruto. Well, we all have those moments.
At first Kyuubi and Naruto were so adorable, the blond cuddling with one of his tails...
But then they started talking about using and tools. xDDD
I hope everything will be alright.
Keep writing and update soon again!
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Neji. Unable to control his Hyuuga smugness. XD lol Oh well. I'm sure all parties will survive the hurt and insult later. *snickers* I feel bad for Naruto though. Poor boy. He's got so much going on now. He really does need help from someone. *hugs Naruto* Anyhow, great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. :) You've got me hooked, that's for sure. ^_^
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never suggest pairings, only wait for the surprise. ^^
Very good chapter. I did not expect the bird lady, although having her be a shape shifter certainly has my thoughts towards the bird-Neji ideas from before. hehehe
Keep up the good work. :D
Very good chapter. I did not expect the bird lady, although having her be a shape shifter certainly has my thoughts towards the bird-Neji ideas from before. hehehe
Keep up the good work. :D
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg... are you insinuating that this could end in a M/M/F threesome??? =O_O= Thats my favorite kind! :D
ooo..ooo...ooo.... pick that ! pick that ! =^^= hehehehehehe
ooo..ooo...ooo.... pick that ! pick that ! =^^= hehehehehehe
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
Good chapter!
Naruto surely has a lot of energy in him. xD
Make it M/M all the way through!
It would be soo hot! xD
And Neji uke is just the best! ..isn't it? xDD Only if he is with a ONE guy though..
But anyway, they don't need any girls.
Sasuke and Naruto are perfect, because they have to keep an eye on each other.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I wanna see how that vacation of theirs is going to work out, now that they have arrived to Suna. :D
Good chapter!
Naruto surely has a lot of energy in him. xD
Make it M/M all the way through!
It would be soo hot! xD
And Neji uke is just the best! ..isn't it? xDD Only if he is with a ONE guy though..
But anyway, they don't need any girls.
Sasuke and Naruto are perfect, because they have to keep an eye on each other.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I wanna see how that vacation of theirs is going to work out, now that they have arrived to Suna. :D
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The chapters don't disappoint me. I always enjoy it when I can not predict what happens in a story. I like attempting to predict them (and am pretty good at it most of the time), but that doesn't mean I'm disappointed when I'm wrong. ^^
Anyway, this was an awesome chapter! Neji's looking a little green around the edges, he turning into a black swan and Naruto's prey just hits a little too close to home? Man... swans are freaking huge sometimes! The ones in the pond by me are pretty goose-sized, but once I ran into a pack of massive ones! I was like wtf?!>!!>!>! It was crazy. O_O
I love the idea of Naruto becoming a bird hunter. Perhaps he should just take Kyuubi's need to hunt as his own as that he can control and manage it. I dunno. Just keep writing and keep up the good work! :D
Anyway, this was an awesome chapter! Neji's looking a little green around the edges, he turning into a black swan and Naruto's prey just hits a little too close to home? Man... swans are freaking huge sometimes! The ones in the pond by me are pretty goose-sized, but once I ran into a pack of massive ones! I was like wtf?!>!!>!>! It was crazy. O_O
I love the idea of Naruto becoming a bird hunter. Perhaps he should just take Kyuubi's need to hunt as his own as that he can control and manage it. I dunno. Just keep writing and keep up the good work! :D