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May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice approach with Hinata "taming" Naruto without him stopping being a dangerous wild animal. And that pain==protection aspect adds an interesting flavoring to the dynamics.
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May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Indeed you are an evil author but we wouldn't have you any other way^_^.
I knew Danzou was involved somehow but not to such lengths. Just thinking about what Danzou could have planned for Hiashi's eye gives me the creeps. The Root is known for some pretty sick experimentations.
I can't believe he doesn't realize that by assaulting Hiashi the focus on his actions will only intensify.
Looking forward to the next update,no matter when that happens.
I knew Danzou was involved somehow but not to such lengths. Just thinking about what Danzou could have planned for Hiashi's eye gives me the creeps. The Root is known for some pretty sick experimentations.
I can't believe he doesn't realize that by assaulting Hiashi the focus on his actions will only intensify.
Looking forward to the next update,no matter when that happens.
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April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fascinating. It's unusual to find a Naru/Sasu fic that doesn't have the whole 'burning obsession with each other' but going on. Not that I don't enjoy the burning obsession *leers* It's a refreshing change, though. The Hinata in this story is much more believable than some I've run across - still shy, but powerful in her own right, confident in her abilities, and with a quiet sense of pride in who and what she is. Exactly what I've always imagined the silly girl to become as she matured. A very interesting dynamic between the three, and I'm looking forward to seeing where the story leads the trio and the rest of their important people. Thank you very much for sharing! (Woot! My first comprehensive review!! They normally consist of "Awesome! I loved it. Keep'em comin'!" *leaves cookies to celebrate*)
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April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think the warning was needed because we've seen where Sasuke's inner thoughts can lead him. With his experiences he can sometimes too easily slip into that dark space in his head.
I'm glad that here he was coming to terms,be they ever so uneasy,with some his motivations for submitting and binding himself to Naruto. That Naruto is as much an anchor to him as he is to Naruto and he very much wants the future he can almost see with Naruto and Hinata. At least,I hope that was some of what you wanted to get across.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm glad that here he was coming to terms,be they ever so uneasy,with some his motivations for submitting and binding himself to Naruto. That Naruto is as much an anchor to him as he is to Naruto and he very much wants the future he can almost see with Naruto and Hinata. At least,I hope that was some of what you wanted to get across.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still keeping up the good work i see; awesome!
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March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This chapter (Double update,Woot^_^)kicked ass! It was well-written and the action was awesome. It kept me guessing on how it would turn out for everyone.
And might I add that you are quite the tease;). You gave us just enough hints to suggest who Takeshi might be but not enough to be super sure. Who knows,you may throw us a curve-ball about his identity. All I can say is that when your muses kick in they do so with a vengeance.
Rest assured that your readers would never think of harming you. If we did we'd never get the rest of this great story:P. Eagerly awaiting your next update.
And might I add that you are quite the tease;). You gave us just enough hints to suggest who Takeshi might be but not enough to be super sure. Who knows,you may throw us a curve-ball about his identity. All I can say is that when your muses kick in they do so with a vengeance.
Rest assured that your readers would never think of harming you. If we did we'd never get the rest of this great story:P. Eagerly awaiting your next update.
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February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome chapter! The butt kicking Hinata put down couldn't have happened to a more deserving hawk^^. Kimi needed the arrogance beat out of her. It was the only she would ever respect Hinata plus that arrogance caused her to assume a lot of obviously wrong ideas about Neji and Hinata. Kimi should've listened to Neji. Hinata's had to deal with and overcome people's misconception that she is weak all her life.
Even though you say Hinata is hard for you to write I think you do a wonderful job throughout the story. You show the growth that Hinata has made from shy and timid to a Hinata that is confident in herself and her skills. She is the type of person that will show you rather than tell you her strenghts. I think you strike a good balance.
I hate to hear your muses are being stubborn. I can hardly wait to see what you come up with once they decide to cooperate again. Take care and DON'T stress^_^. We'll be here whenever you update.
Even though you say Hinata is hard for you to write I think you do a wonderful job throughout the story. You show the growth that Hinata has made from shy and timid to a Hinata that is confident in herself and her skills. She is the type of person that will show you rather than tell you her strenghts. I think you strike a good balance.
I hate to hear your muses are being stubborn. I can hardly wait to see what you come up with once they decide to cooperate again. Take care and DON'T stress^_^. We'll be here whenever you update.
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February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter. Kimi definitely needed to be knocked down a few pegs and I love how you portrayed Hinata in this. She was strong, focused and determined - all the character traits that Naruto inspires out of her, but we rarely get to see because she is so shy and nervous. You didn't have her come off too bold or aggressive (a trap I think many fanfic writers fall into) but rather focusing on taking the battle one step at a time. She wasn't trying to showboat, just use her skills to the fullest.
I wonder how Kimi is going to be affected by this. It certainly puts things into a new perspective for her. Kimi comes off to confident for her own good and that arrogance makes her weak.
Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter when your muse kicks back in. lol
I wonder how Kimi is going to be affected by this. It certainly puts things into a new perspective for her. Kimi comes off to confident for her own good and that arrogance makes her weak.
Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter when your muse kicks back in. lol
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February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved Hinata's internal dialogue. I'm glad to see her thoughts all over the place and the secret way she's cultivating a fantasy that includes Sasuke. lol. I also appreciate her practical concerns. She's level headed in a way that the boys are not.
Also, Go Hinata! for sticking up to Kimi like that. I hope you don't mind, but while reading her tell off Kimi, in my head I took the liberty of adding the word "bitch" to the challenge. hehe. Not that Hinata would say something like that, but it felt good to throw it in there. lol
Keep up the great work! Its always a pleasure. ^^
Also, Go Hinata! for sticking up to Kimi like that. I hope you don't mind, but while reading her tell off Kimi, in my head I took the liberty of adding the word "bitch" to the challenge. hehe. Not that Hinata would say something like that, but it felt good to throw it in there. lol
Keep up the great work! Its always a pleasure. ^^
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January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the emails, always brings a smile to my face when i see another one :)