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for Disguised Curses

by Raholea

person Leeana69
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The implied het.

*shudders*

I haven't read a Naruto fic in a while, but you and Dina are the only ones I'll consistently go back to. Good chapter, it's an interesting fic and I can't wait to see what you do next. Even with all the het.

*toddles off to go work on lycan fluff*
person Djargo
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you updating again. This chapter was really good. It was very touching,almost sad how both Neji and Naruto were contemplating their futures or lack thereof because of their other selves. I look forward to the next chapter to see where you take these characters.
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Keep up the good work! ^^

Also, I like all the concerns for the future in this one. Naruto is very practical and Neji just wants to be loved. ^^
person Djargo
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe it's been so long since I reviewed.*hangs head in shame* I apologize, since I really enjoy your stories and like giving quality writers their due.
I was so excited to see this story updated^_^. I enjoyed reading how both Neji and Naruto are coming to terms with the changes in their natures. I like how Kimi is showing Neji that a perceived weakness can be a strength since the Hyuga clan is all about showing strength not weakness.
I don't exactly know what to make of the prospective changes the continued merging of Kyuubi's and Naruto's chakras will do to Naruto. It's a toss up between slightly disturbing and kinda sexy~_^. Looking forward to what surprises you toss at us.
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the shout out. =^^=

Also, great chapter. I loved Naruto's and Sasuke's worries regarding children. I was also shocked at how drastic Naruto's changes will ultimately be, although I'm glad Kyuubi is going to teach him some of his traditional kitsune demon shape shifting illusions. (Kitsune are notorious for that anyway.)

Keep up the great work!
person Leeana69
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter, even though I read half of it before hand. :p

Can't wait to see what you're doing with the next one, and what you plan to do with Sasuke...after the direction Kishimoto has taken him.

*growls*
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Proper updates have returned!! Woo Hoo! ^_^

I hope you decide to keep both Hinata and Sasuke for Naruto. He's a fox. They tend to be bisexual shapeshifters in various stories. It would suit his new character. :D

Also I look forward to seeing what Kimi teaches Neji. Keep up the great work!
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
1-Kimi is awesome.
2-I love how stoic and short both Neji and Gaara are with their writing.
3-Kiba. Pranks. Enough said. <3
person Leeana69
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Glad I could help out with your 'Neji' voice.

I'm still waiting for some smut though. *pouty face*
person Djargo
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update! YAY!!! Poor Naruto :( . His emerging instincts are really kicking his butt. Good things he has such understanding friends 'cause he's gonna need them, especially with the biting and blood ^_^. I hope he works out his feelings for Hinata because he really needs a hug.

Thank you for the response. I'm glad my review could provide you with some inspiration. I greatly appreciate you sharing your time and wonderful stories because full-time mommy so takes precedence over story updates. I'm a patient reader and really enjoy your writing so I'm in for the long haul ^_^.
Also, I poked your stories, they poked backed;then I jumped and devoured them 0_0. The stories and the writing were very good. I'll wait ,with anticipation, for your next update.