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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
flows like a smooth wine i love it and will be watching for updates i would for one love to see Both Neji AND Hinata with Naruto but then again im one of the pervyest book wyrms you will find and for some really odd reason i happen to love moresomes more then anything else please keep it flowing couse like i said the tale just flows real smooth
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. It was nice to read over what I had when you first showed it to me and see where you're going with this. The thought of Naruto curled into a corner trying to sleep behind some of Gaara's sand is rather cute. And Neji! Is he FINALLY going to have some black feathers pop out? :3 Do want! lol
I look forward to your next update, deary. *nods*
I look forward to your next update, deary. *nods*
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I kinda skimmed through it cause I'm watching Dexter...^-^;;
Anyway, I liked Naruto's whole semi vampire deal. And Gaara being all commanding Seme. *droolz*
Poor Neji, he's just gonna get gang banged one delicious night. And I'll be there, creeping in the shadows with a camera.
Anyway, I liked Naruto's whole semi vampire deal. And Gaara being all commanding Seme. *droolz*
Poor Neji, he's just gonna get gang banged one delicious night. And I'll be there, creeping in the shadows with a camera.
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Updates!
I always get excited when I see you've posted a new chapter to this. ^^
Gaara and Naruto have such a great relationship in this. They really do. Its almost a shame they actually live so far apart.[Although, in situations like this, its a good thing so hopefully Naruto can do as much as he can to cope, deal, and learn to control his new demonic self before returning to the judging eyes of Konoha. The more he can accomplish the better for him upon his return.]
I will look forward to Hinata and Naruto getting together, but I also feel like I picked up somewhere along the way that Sasuke and Naruto were together or something along those lines. Its been a while so maybe I just need to go back and reread everything.. but if this ends in a trio of a relationship between the three of them.... then my god. That would just be perfection. [purrr... =^^=]
Keep up the great work. :D
I always get excited when I see you've posted a new chapter to this. ^^
Gaara and Naruto have such a great relationship in this. They really do. Its almost a shame they actually live so far apart.[Although, in situations like this, its a good thing so hopefully Naruto can do as much as he can to cope, deal, and learn to control his new demonic self before returning to the judging eyes of Konoha. The more he can accomplish the better for him upon his return.]
I will look forward to Hinata and Naruto getting together, but I also feel like I picked up somewhere along the way that Sasuke and Naruto were together or something along those lines. Its been a while so maybe I just need to go back and reread everything.. but if this ends in a trio of a relationship between the three of them.... then my god. That would just be perfection. [purrr... =^^=]
Keep up the great work. :D
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I'm one of your faves? *Feels honored* I'm glad there will be yaoi, and I'm really, really, REALLY hopin' it's an uke Neji, as I know we both like him on bottom. *wink, wink, nudge, nudge* If he isn't topped by Naruto, I'm totally fine with that, just so long as he's topped. *grins madly* And I'm still totally loving. ^_^ Keep up the good work and good luck with the full-time-mommy thing. I would so totally suck at that. Although, I kinda feel like that's my role, just exchange the one year old for an 83 year old alzheimer's grandmother.
Uh, yeah, beside the point. Great story. Great chapter. Am patiently waiting for the next chapter. ^_^
Uh, yeah, beside the point. Great story. Great chapter. Am patiently waiting for the next chapter. ^_^
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I started reading this and could not stop. I read the whole story in one sitting. Great writing. The plot and situations are wonderfully original. The relationship between Kyuubi and Naruto is complex and compelling at the same time. It drew me in and wouldn't let go. Pretty please, with sprinkles on top,continue this story. I would love to see where Neji's and Hinata's stories are headed as well. Awaiting your update with bated breath.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd love it if you would email me when you update!! Thanks so much for offering. My email is lady_malynn@yahoo.com huggles and snuggles to ya!!
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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger!!! Darn you!! I'm totally diggin this and I'm terribly interested in who you'll hook Neji up with. I'm a yaoi girl, so, of course, I'm hopin its a guy... Pwease. *bats lashes... offers cookie...* Love, love, can't wait to read more. ^_^
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh shit!! Neji really needs to watch his mouth. Things have been calming down between them and he up and challenges the thing that wants to eat him?! ooooooooooo Neji better hope he learns how to fly, and soon! lol
Keep up the awesome work. ^^
Keep up the awesome work. ^^
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear oh dear oh dear! Neji-kun, run! lol Or be a Hyuuga and fight Kyuubi to the death. Either works. XD Of course, if Neji dies, then there won't be any hot smexings between him and another character. Hm....Maybe he should just run for now. lol
Good chapter. :) I really enjoyed it. It was more then what I was expecting, but all of it was very well written. I think I liked the part where both Sakura and Naruto were shocked with the 'venom' Hinata had in her voice. And the fact that she was so bold. Come on, Naru! Give her a chance! lol I anxiously await the next chapter. :3
Good chapter. :) I really enjoyed it. It was more then what I was expecting, but all of it was very well written. I think I liked the part where both Sakura and Naruto were shocked with the 'venom' Hinata had in her voice. And the fact that she was so bold. Come on, Naru! Give her a chance! lol I anxiously await the next chapter. :3