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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It just kills me that she and Sasuke can't be together. However, I can't wait to see the sparks fly with Gaara.
Rox
Rox
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Married already huh? Wow that's awful for Sakura. And now She and Sasuke are going to do the dirty in Gaara's palace. That can't have a great outcome. I loved the interaction between Ino and Sakura. Very funny indeed.
Just want to say 'thank you!' for spacing out the paragraphs. It really helped alot when reading it.
Looking forward to more please update when possible!
Just want to say 'thank you!' for spacing out the paragraphs. It really helped alot when reading it.
Looking forward to more please update when possible!
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm, I'm very interested in seeing where this story is headed :), I hope you continue it!
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT SO SUCKS! Poor Saukura! I feel so bad for her. I can't wait to see the drunk Tsunade though. That's funny. Update soon. ^_^
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! This is the kind of story I scour archives for endlessly, day after day. You make me so happy, I might just cry. :') Keep writing and posting, I'm always reading.
ALWAYS. >.>
ALWAYS. >.>
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damnit, I actually cried! This makes me crave a sasusaku story...
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a wonderful story so far. Everything looks really nice. Grammar and spelling are almost perfect. The only thing I would suggest is to space out your paragraphs. It can be difficult to read when it's all bunched together. I find myself losing my place every once in awhile. Other than that it looks beautiful. It's definately hard finding a well written Saku/Gaa fic.
I'm liking where you're taking this one. Everyone seems to have perfect characterization. It seems Gaara is not an easy character to write and get right while doing it. I have seen many try and fail miserably. This story looks different though. I truly think he's acting just the way he should so far. I also enjoy the tiny quirks of humor thrown in as well. For example, when he said he ate small children and other mammals.
I love that these two aren't thinking this is going to be some happy fairy tale, that will make all their dreams come true. For one Gaara didn't even know her name. Which as odd as it sounds, I really liked that part. It wasn't a "he's watched her from afar and secretly dreamed of her" kind of thing I see so often. I feel awful for her. She's finally gotten the man that she's wanted all of her life and now she can't have him.
So far it's very good and I will be looking forward to more updates.
I'm liking where you're taking this one. Everyone seems to have perfect characterization. It seems Gaara is not an easy character to write and get right while doing it. I have seen many try and fail miserably. This story looks different though. I truly think he's acting just the way he should so far. I also enjoy the tiny quirks of humor thrown in as well. For example, when he said he ate small children and other mammals.
I love that these two aren't thinking this is going to be some happy fairy tale, that will make all their dreams come true. For one Gaara didn't even know her name. Which as odd as it sounds, I really liked that part. It wasn't a "he's watched her from afar and secretly dreamed of her" kind of thing I see so often. I feel awful for her. She's finally gotten the man that she's wanted all of her life and now she can't have him.
So far it's very good and I will be looking forward to more updates.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was actually crying at the whole Sasuke/ Sakura thing. Don't it figure? Finally and BAM!! She has to marry someone she doesn't love.
I can't wait to read more.
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I can't wait to read more.
Rox