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person Kiana Dienna Wade
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job
person Purvy Sage
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, curiosity got the best of me when I read on FF that your most current, and longest, Naruto fic had an adult version. So first, a quick look at the missing "chapter 13" and now you've got me hooked.

This was really good.

It's good to know that you can "go there" because I was almost getting bored with the PG-13 stuff I had been reading. Not that I need XXX stuff to be happy, but once in a while it's a very good thing. XD
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Original Idea And Such A Sad Ending. *Sniffle*
person sarah
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what an incredibly somber ending :( But I did love all your snippets :)
person MrsCake
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know this is just snippet into Sakura's life, but I was bit confused by the 'Littlest' girl reference. Did they have more than one child or was it just a term of endearment? Anyways, a bittersweet glimpse and I'm sad to see that it was the last chap. Wah!
person roxnroll
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh NOOOOOO!!!!!What happened to Sasuke? Killed on a mission? How sad. Wonderful job though.
Rox
person MrsCake
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really dark and a little creepy, but definitely sexy. I have to say Madara is becoming one of my new fav chars from the manga.
person roxnroll
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really twisted, but I must say that I liked it. And the whole manga thing- I didn't see it coming. I think I always hoped for the best, but Madara just messes up a free lunch huh?
Rox
person roxnroll
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was heavy. Whoa!! Good job.
Rox
person roxnroll
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THat is so like Naruto.
Rox