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schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When it comes to personal experiences. Something tells me I have a good idea of what it could be. I refuse to guess about such things and will wait and see. But I'll just say I've had more then my fair share for being not quite 21 yet. Looking forward to the next installment!
person kiayu
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story
person Ryu Earth
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that Kakashi called Iruka, Iruka-bear! XD
That is so cute, and it only gets cuter because I have a cat Sunny, whom I call Sunny-bear! =)
person a kitsunes light
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG!!!! This was REALLY worth the wait!! AWESOME CHAPTER!!!
Im eally looking forward to reading the next one,!!!!
person Jess_Mess
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God this is an amazing story!!!
I absorlutly love it!!!!!!
I look forward too the next chapter!!!!
To prove how much I love this story and how much I want another chapter, I'll admit that I went looking for just something light to read before going to bed at about 11.30pm, It's now 3.30am and I'm so wide awake wanting to know what wil happen next! Is it really Minato? How will Kiba react? How will NARUTO react? What is the significants of "Minato" showing up now? Oooooh! now I can't wait for more!!!

The story line is so strong, the characters personalities are clear and believable and I just wish that I was either Kiba or Naruto!

Best of luck with writing the next chapter!!!!
person pepper54
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I was just thinking about this story and here you gone and put up another chapter.
person Jan
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope everything starts looking up for Naruto soon...

Please update chapter 23 soon ^_^

Jan
person a kitsunes light
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWwwww the ending of this chapter was soooo Cute!!! I can't wait to read more! But I am also scared to know what comes next, because I am almost sure it wont be pleasant...
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you finally updated this fic! I've been following your writing for a while but got sad when nothing was coming out. I look forward to many more updates from you and will continue reading happily
person a kitsunes light
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I can't wait to know what happens next!!!
What is that about kyuubi and chief?!?!?! I can't wait to find out!!!