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I don't know what to put to show how exceited I am about this fic. Your story is unique and well written as far as I'm concerned :) I'm off to check out your other stories now...

Love this first chapter! Has so much drama and mystery that it just draws you in. Can't wait to see what twists you have in store.

Yet another incredible chapter! I like that Naruto is older in this it gives the story a different feel to it. The dialogue is amazing switching from dark humour to sarcasm to sweet concern; I like the way you've had them interact so far. Also I'm dying to know who "they" are and why Sasuke ran away. Including Itachi and the end too was an interesting development I look forward to seeing how he'll play into the plot. Hope you're inspired to write more of this soon.

I like it!!! And sorry I actually missed the first chapter so I'm just now reading it. You did a great job of showing the stress Sasuke was under when he was running at the beginning. I was worried a bit over the handcuffs but I'm glad that Naruto was just teasing... especially with the drawing on his face lol. I wondered when Sasuke didn't know who Naruto was even though he was friends with Itachi. So they aren't brothers? Actually I'm kind of saddened over that because Itachi caring about his brother is one of the things I really like about them. And Sasuke did say that he had previously had no money problems. Maybe a bastard brother who Itachi doesn't know about and was secretly supported? No? aww well... anyway lol. Hope you continue this!

i like it, thats all i have to say...joking joking.i love the flow of this and the fact that sasukes the one whos running..and much younger too.too bad about sasuke and itachi not being siblings though i didnt expect itachi to be narutos besd friend actually i thought it would be kiba.hmm...break up, gaara may be the ex boyfriend.an art teacher for elementry schoolers sounds fun,arent most 1st graders 6,being a teacher myself i guess i should know but still.so itachi taveled in the hellish weather to come bother naturo, and sasukes already possessive of him.cant wait to see what happens next

~kai

Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

this sounds like its going to be fun. naru is pleasantly quirky. ^^

Aweee!! Read the chapter before I read the summary, and then I just gushed x) *Squeal of delight* That chase was intense! I'm so glad he made it (for now) out of harms way! I was puzzled wondering who Sasuke could possibly be laying atop of, when i read older male with blue eyes I started thinking Arashi O_O But this is in the Naruto/Sasuke section so it must be my favorite blond ninja! Yay!! Alright! I need to read more of this, so my review ends here! (This was awesome!) XOXOXs Kei-Chan!

This story is awesome so far. I hope you continue it soon.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!