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for Bunri, Yugo

by LadyNyoko

schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this...me like...can't wait for more!
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good pacing and great idea. Sasuke is going to get a start when he realizes Naruto is no longer available to his whims. Kyuubi will take great care of him!
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schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm... i'm liking it. kinda curious over the seperation but i've always enjoyed the appearance of Kyuubi in a human body. makes me want to pounce him and cuddle... well, and come out alive. i have the full impression if anyone other than naruto or *maybe* sasuke were to ever pounce on Kyuubi, it'd be a deathwish. but he's just too cute with those eyes and claws and whiskers..

anyway, yeah.. i'm liking the story, want to see more. i like the relatively nice kyuubi and the new look. thanks for writing and keep it up!!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Naruto and Kyuubi's so willing acceptance of each other is simply adorable. I can tell I'm going to like the pace in which their relationship develops. My only questions are regarding why Tsunade isn't more concerned with this and what side effects does Naruto have as a result of this split? Its not a merger.. or atleast there is no evidence to such effect.. yet I can't help but feel in Kyuubi has become alot more humanized, then Naruto (who still bears the whisker marks) must have atleast become slightly more demonic in some way. Kyuubi's out, but does Naruto still bear the seal? I'm curious to know!

Keep up the good work!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far and cant wait for the next chapter! I've never read a story with Naruto and Kyubbi as the couple, but I'm enjoying this! Update when you have the chance please!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kawii i like the look you gave him its sexy
and daydreams about naruto HA! that was rich i wonder what naruto would think if he caught him in action lol
probably something along the line of OMG with his jaw droping to the ground
heh heh your stories great i can't wait until you get more out onto the press